Wet Wednesday

Wet Wednesday Its raining I’m smiling All cozzzzzzzy warm in my bed Good morning Listening to the sound of rain Patter, splatter, pitter, pat I’m smiling What business does a bicycle riding Gardner have in the pouring rain….. Close my eyes smiling Hypnotised by falling rain It’s a good morning

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Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/8/2008 4:49:00 AM

One of my favorite things in the world is a rainy day! I really like the lines "What business does a bicycle riding/Gardner have in the pouring rain", and you've captured the happiness of a rainy morning very well in this little poem. ~Juliane

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 12/4/2008 10:57:00 AM

like the rain.. it could go on and on and on and on in this melody... patter splat plot plitter plop...

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 12/4/2008 10:55:00 AM

pitter pat patter pit splatter plut putter splot splatter plit splotter plat pitter pat pat pitter pat BLIP splatter plop ..............

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/2/2008 3:39:00 PM

I want to crawl right back in after reading this..and its afternoon here :). BG

Michael Torres

Date: 12/2/2008 12:42:00 PM

Colin the simple truth. I'ts nice to have peace and rest and to be calmed by natures rain. What a fitting profession to take advantage of not working with great reason. This is different then your mezmerizing writes. It shows your versatility in your craft. Reallyenjoyed the thoughts written here. It's nice to have those stay in bed days. Blessings to you Michael

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/2/2008 12:25:00 PM

I love it too, while all cozy in my bed, to hear it coming down outside! :) Nice and warm, like your poem, in spite of the rain! :) Carrie