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Wet Wednesday

Wet Wednesday

Its raining

I’m smiling

All cozzzzzzzy warm in my bed

Good morning

Listening to the sound of rain

Patter, splatter, pitter, pat 

I’m smiling

What business does a bicycle riding
Gardner have in the pouring rain…..

Close my eyes
smiling
Hypnotised by falling rain

It’s a good morning

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Juliane Thomas Date: 12/8/2008 4:49:00 AM One of my favorite things in the world is a rainy day! I really like the lines "What business does a bicycle riding/Gardner have in the pouring rain", and you've captured the happiness of a rainy morning very well in this little poem. ~Juliane Login to Reply

Colin Mitchell Williams Date: 12/4/2008 10:57:00 AM like the rain.. it could go on and on and on and on in this melody... patter splat plot plitter plop... Login to Reply

Colin Mitchell Williams Date: 12/4/2008 10:55:00 AM pitter pat patter pit splatter plut putter splot splatter plit splotter plat pitter pat pat pitter pat BLIP splatter plop .............. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 12/2/2008 3:39:00 PM I want to crawl right back in after reading this..and its afternoon here :). BG Login to Reply

Michael Torres Date: 12/2/2008 12:42:00 PM Colin the simple truth. I'ts nice to have peace and rest and to be calmed by natures rain. What a fitting profession to take advantage of not working with great reason. This is different then your mezmerizing writes. It shows your versatility in your craft. Reallyenjoyed the thoughts written here. It's nice to have those stay in bed days. Blessings to you Michael Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 12/2/2008 12:25:00 PM I love it too, while all cozy in my bed, to hear it coming down outside! :) Nice and warm, like your poem, in spite of the rain! :) Carrie Login to Reply