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Wet Day, My First Cinquain

Rainfall Coming down hard Like sheets of rolling glass Evergreens release newborn acorns fast Soggy Line 1- 2 syllables Line 2- 4 syllables Line 3- 6 syllables Line 4- 8 syllables Line 5- 2 syllables See Types of Poems for more clarity on Cinqains. Thank you. 5/16/2019 8:45am PST

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/17/2019 1:02:00 AM

Unusual form that I've never tried, hope you're better. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/17/2019 1:13:00 AM

Hi, Tom! That form is more than the syllables. It's very disciplined. Check it out at the Soup. I feel good just tired, I worked too many hours a day on this site for 2 months.It caught up with me.4 hours sleep is not Good. thanks Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/16/2019 12:40:00 PM

Hello Panagiota Romios, well done for your first time doing this type of poetry. have a nice day my friend,

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/16/2019 1:24:00 PM

Thank you and the same to you my friend.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/16/2019 12:52:00 PM

Hello Darlene, Many thanks. It's not just the syllables as you know. I was pleased with the results.Did not think I could do it.May your day have magic in it..my friend ~~~Panagiota~~~