Bj Legros Kelley Poet Haiku

Westward Wind

                                                 daisy's face upward
                                          dust devil howling westward
                                                 every petal shakes

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I Am Anaya May 28, 2026 at 8:33 AM The dust devil used has charmed me so, BJ, cleverly done! Great imagery

Valsa George May 26, 2026 at 8:24 PM Great image and the power of the west wind. Beautiful haiku.

Gershon Wolf May 23, 2026 at 9:34 PM Sch penetrating imagery in just 17 words. Bravo, Bj. Bj Legros Kelley May 25, 2026 at 1:16 AM Thank you Gershon, I had such fun playing around with haikus, they are tricky little things, but I think I got this one right. I hope you had a wonderful First Fruits celebration today :)

Andrea Dietrich May 20, 2026 at 2:46 PM I like this one even better! Bj Legros Kelley May 20, 2026 at 6:33 PM This one is my favorite too :)