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Wesak: Vision Quest

(linked Sijo) Outside my tent a circle of gray stones a place for fire my heart heavenward no hat, no shoes, no shirt under a cloudless blue. a little chipmunk scurries out of my tent No eagle in the sky, Soon I forget the river's song, falling asleep in the deepening darkness, in the moonrise, I listen again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/21/2015 7:06:00 AM
It gives a feeling of being on a great vision quest .
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Date: 4/17/2015 4:11:00 PM
Thomas, your poem was wonderfully penned, 7, and do not be disappointed with the chipmunk, they are an animal that survives hardships even though a small size, it threatens no other creature and lives a life of peace and thanks for visiting my poem, I, Poet
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Date: 4/17/2015 2:31:00 PM
Beautifully done. Are you native American? BG
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