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....Werewolves....

Today I got to watch one of the most pathetic displays Of human dignity, morals and character, that my eyes they have 'ever' beheld It was like being in the midst of a safaris jungle, within a surreals disbelief Watching these certain cannibalistic animals, running wild and sadly free.... Feeling so much compassion for the recipient, of their pang filled poisoned bites This shameless sort of something, twisted and tainted to their very cores! Darkened bendings, of perverteds disgusting minds--lucifers offspring.... Taking an innocent moment of purity, and trying to rape her like a sullied whore Oh how my eyes burned as I watched them, chewing, upon their own stench-filled flesh Especially this toothless one, with a forked tongue, to go with his distainful smile! And then this lady? Who continues to drag 'The Cross of Christ' Through her ever clear and broadening trail, of gangrene laced puke.... The pounding pulse within my boiling veins At this 'true' glimpse into their ever blackened eyes While they strapped this precious flower, that I have admired with a tender love.... Unwillingly, to a sacrificial tree, to viciously extract, a piece of her priceless heart Such malicious vessels of decay, foaming at their dying mouths But that's alright I thought? For 'Heaven' has a silver bullet, marked Eternal, and just waiting, for the likes of they! These lurking midnight creatures, of the mangled blood drenched moon Soon to perish in their creeping, depravities dogs of damnation, in disguise.... Shedding the wool that they often wear--'surprise' Swept away, into the pits of the shadows of forgotten Unto the howlings of their forevermore, and scorching demise! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ....Werewolves....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/14/2009 10:23:00 AM
Dear John, I wish I could take away your anger. You have such strong emotions, and they are well-defined in your excellent verse! Thanks for the comment on my Valentine poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/27/2009 7:32:00 PM
This is deep and dark and powerful, John. Wow, I do not know how to begin...I took the same message that John Heck did. Your soul is bright like a torch.:) Love, Sara
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Date: 1/27/2009 2:55:00 PM
Dear John, thank you for all your encouragement and praise. You have the dearest heart and you are just too kind to me. Thank you and never change, John. You are a bright light on this site. Love, Robin
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Date: 1/27/2009 1:02:00 PM
I picked that passage because it reminds me of you and the good in you and of your heart that holds all that is good in the eyes of God. Love and peace, Robin
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Date: 1/27/2009 1:00:00 PM
I would write to you and tell you what was bothering me because that would be the fair thing to do. So rest assured, my dearest John, I now and will always consider you a dear and faithful friend. Please be well and I will try to keep a little more on top of things. (Galatians 5:22-23) Love always, Robin
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Date: 1/27/2009 12:50:00 PM
Wow, John. This is a very strong write. I like the image of "Heavens silver bullet". I'm sorry I missed this yeasterday. I've been checking to see if you have been around. I thought you may be working and I guess I've gotten behind. You have the dearest heart John and I respect and look forward to sharing our words. You could never say or do anything that would make me stop writing to you. Trust me if something like that happened I would talk to you about it. (CONT)
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Date: 1/27/2009 6:49:00 AM
Hey John! What a viciously disturbing scene to witness! Makes one wonder about those "twisted and tainted to their very cores". Surely acts of "Werewolves". This is a dark and distressing piece; though rightly so. Would make my own blood pulse "within my boiling veins". God's blessings to you, John Rhinem, and to the victims, who have had to unwillingly succumb to these loathsome and sinister attacks. A true horror. Wishing the best to you and yours..Love to you, Mikki
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Date: 1/27/2009 5:06:00 AM
Good gravey, this is so strong, so loud and honest, whoever they are, I feel sorry for all of them. yikes, warewolves indeed. love, Kristin
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Date: 1/27/2009 5:04:00 AM
Another thought moving write by you John. The heart of people and the depth of darkness that resides. You have way with words brother John and your heart always rise to the top in your work. Great Job!
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Date: 1/27/2009 1:57:00 AM
Hi Mr. Rhimen - Wow - we write so differently - and maybe that's why I'm attracted to your poetry. This poems floats on different levels and conveys one message - seeing the liars/demons and overcoming the outiside obstacles that promote/hinder happiness. Maybe my interpretation of this lovely write is wrong but, in retrospect, I commend your underlying message. Peace and blessings always, John
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