Jan Allison Poet Haiku

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We'Re Snow In Love

snowflakes kiss our cheeks
winter blanket keeps us warm
hearts melt together

03~01~15
Get Romantic – Andrea Dietrich
Visual Seven

Traditional Haiku 5,7,5
Checked with How Many Syllables
~awarded 4th place~

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Harpreet Kaur March 15, 2015 at 7:49 AM Great job!! Jan Allison March 15, 2015 at 8:30 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Harpreet:-) Hugs jan xx

Reason A. Poteet March 11, 2015 at 9:54 PM Congratulations on a romantic haiku. Very good imagery here. Jan Allison March 12, 2015 at 5:22 AM Thanks so much Reason:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance March 11, 2015 at 5:33 PM Grats on your win! finally I'm getting around to read these romantic writes again. :) Hugs, stay warm :) Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 5:34 PM There are too many contests judged and too many poems to read - don't get time to write lol! Hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 9, 2015 at 1:10 AM A sweet poem and win, Jan...back with my congrats...hugs, Rhonda Jan Allison March 9, 2015 at 9:58 AM Thanks Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A March 8, 2015 at 6:17 PM JAN, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~ Jan Allison March 8, 2015 at 6:21 PM Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan x

Poet Destroyer A March 8, 2015 at 12:08 PM Anytime Jan... :) :) :) Jan Allison March 8, 2015 at 12:11 PM :-) xx

Poet Destroyer A March 8, 2015 at 11:55 AM Hello Jan, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Jan Allison March 8, 2015 at 12:06 PM Thanks Linda:-) Hugs jan xx

Hija De La Luna March 7, 2015 at 8:36 PM Jan, I had that feeling when I saw the image! Beautiful write! congratulations! Hugs! Jan Allison March 8, 2015 at 6:01 AM Many thanks Hija:-) hugs Jan xx

Debbie Guzzi March 7, 2015 at 7:11 PM portrays the art perfectly. Congrad's on your win. Light & love Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 7:12 PM Thanks so much Debbie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus March 7, 2015 at 4:06 PM Pleased to be back with congratulations, Jan...very merited!! hugs // paul Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 4:10 PM Thanks Paul it was a great challenge Andrea set for us:-) Hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker March 7, 2015 at 1:01 PM Congratulations Jan, I felt the crunch of the snow Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 1:11 PM Thanks for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot March 7, 2015 at 11:10 AM another lovely haiku from you, you always do these short forms justice; I love the witty word play in the title - congrats on your win! hugs, charlotte Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 11:12 AM Thank you so much Charlotte - your wonderful words spur me on to try even harder with my writing - and I do try and have fun with the titles too:-) Hugs Jan xxx

John Lawless March 7, 2015 at 7:16 AM Jan, you had me at "Snow in Love". Great title and wonderful haiku. The contradictions in lines 2 and 3 are synapse teasers. Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 8:49 AM Thanks so much John for your lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May March 7, 2015 at 6:35 AM Congrats on a great win Jan Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 8:48 AM Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty March 7, 2015 at 5:51 AM Love Jan...Congrats Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 8:48 AM Thanks Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley March 7, 2015 at 2:04 AM Any room under that blanket for me? Answer soon- I might get cold feet :) Congrats, Jan. Viv x Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 4:38 AM Ha ha ha Mr Viv ... I always have cold feet:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez March 7, 2015 at 12:45 AM Congrats Jan! hugs! :D Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 4:37 AM Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2015 at 11:40 PM Jan, of all the snow poems, yours is the most delightful. Loved the cute title you gave this one and that final line. That is what melted my heart. Congrats for a great win in my contest. Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 4:37 AM Thanks for the 4th place - will get round to reading the winners later:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser March 4, 2015 at 12:36 PM Your words have warmed this image Jan. Good luck in Andrea's contest, hugs, James xx James Fraser March 4, 2015 at 1:58 PM It's me on holiday, and I'm not the best at having my photo taken but I smiled on this holiday ;-) xx Jan Allison March 4, 2015 at 1:49 PM Thanks so much James ... love the new avatar:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath March 4, 2015 at 9:53 AM A nice image speaks the alike your beautiful poem. Enjoyed a lot. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl Jan Allison March 4, 2015 at 9:54 AM Thanks so much BL:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Cona Adams March 3, 2015 at 10:19 AM Love it, Jan. Great photo too. Jan Allison March 3, 2015 at 10:25 AM Thanks Cona - Andrea posted 7 images for us to chose - I loved this one - I hope she likes my poem:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick March 2, 2015 at 1:41 PM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..I like the imagine..Thanks for stopping by..I changed the poem that you just read..Sara Jan Allison March 2, 2015 at 1:43 PM Oh I will drop by - rhymezone sure comes up with some interesting idea lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire March 2, 2015 at 1:29 PM A delightful image, dear Jan. Summer has it's own "warm blanket" and it cannot be discarded. I just love winter and your haiku! Best wishes in the contest. Love, carolyn Jan Allison March 2, 2015 at 1:32 PM Thank you so much Carolyn - I do hope Andrea approves i tried so hard to get this right:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ken Jordan March 2, 2015 at 11:32 AM Jan, I'm ready to get cozy by the fire, and snuggle the night away - great Haiku! Ken Jan Allison March 2, 2015 at 11:36 AM Thanks so much Ken for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser March 2, 2015 at 10:46 AM Wonderful haiku, Jan! Good luck in the contest! Jan Allison March 2, 2015 at 10:48 AM Thanks Laura:-) Jan xxx

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