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Inspired by the beauty of inland bodies of water, from farm ponds and small lakes
to the big lakes, and the happiness that each offers true fishermen's dreams of the "big one".  Maybe I'll go fishin' this year....who knows.  There's a big private pond next to a golf course I play.  The owner has never allowed fishing there; but I found and returned his lost dog, so maybe....    There are some big ones there. All my fishing golf buddies say so.

Went Fishin'

Submitted to the "Gone Fishin" contest
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Trollin’ the islands at Texoma,
It was April, 1964.
New rod and reel in hand,
I’d NEVER been fishing before.

A Garcia 2510T casting rod.
The reel, a Mitchell 301,
Plus hand-selected worms and lures…
I was ready to have some fun.

My teacher, a master fisherman,
Had fished all over the earth...
From trout in Austrian mountain streams
To sea bass just west of Australia's Perth.

He showed me all the basics,
Including how to tie a lure.
“No snaps. They’re no good.
Tie’em on…just to be sure.”

He made me practice casting.
“Take aim with your rod’s tip 
Take her back - ten, eleven, twelve, one;
Smoothly return to ten… with just a little flip.”

While I practiced the casting motion,
He said, “Large Mouths will be jumpin’ bugs.
Water’s bubblin’ with Sand Bass spawnin’.
You’ll know the difference if one gives you a tug.”

As we drifted around the islands,
He said, “I think you’re ready.”
So, I picked a lure, a pretty Heddon;
And tied her on.  My hands were steady.

Yellow with black dots and a weed guard. 
A streamer tail and double treble hooks.
Who knew if she would do the job,
But I sure did like the way she looked.

As I tied her on, I looked around
For a likely place for my first cast.
Magazine pictures always showed weeds
In the background of a striking Bass.

So, I picked a reed bed in the shallows;
Threw my first cast, watched her fly.
What happened next was the stuff of dreams.
We couldn’t believe our eyes. 

About eighteen inches before she lit,
A monstrous Large Mouth erupted from the water.
My teacher screamed, “Holy Mary, Mother of God!  
Kiss O’Reilly’s Ugly Daughter!”

When the Bass broke water, it scared me. 
My whole body jerked and shook.
So sudden, so silent, it seemed like slow motion.
Until I heard him screaming, “Set the hook!  Set the hook!”

When the big Bass scared me,
I must have set the hook.
The tussle was on, long and hard.
This fish didn’t want to be cooked.

My lack of skills prevailed, however,
As I finally reeled him in;
I grabbed him by the lower lip,
Like I’d seen Don Wallace do, time and time again.

“Oh, my God”, he murmured as he weighed the Bass;
“Jeez.  Over thirteen pounds....Thirteen pounds, two.”
He took out his Polaroid and laughed, 
“I’ll take a picture of this fish... holdin' you.”

He snapped the picture of me holding the Bass;
On the back wrote the date, the length and weight.
As he turned to put the camera away……
Get ready.  This is the part that’s great.

I’d watched Don Wallace ‘catch and release’.
He always did that on his show.
“This fish put up a good fight.” he’d say;
“Now it’s time to let him go.”

Yes, as my teacher put away the camera,
I held the big Bass by the lower lip and tail
And ‘swished’ him in the water,
Making sure his gills would not fail.

My teacher turned and saw what I was doing
And just as I let the big Bass go.
This, too, was like slow motion
As I heard him screaming, “NOOOOOOO!”

“Why would you do that, Lad?
Do ya know nothin’ at all?
A fish like that... on your very first cast?
Well...Lad, that fish goes on the wall.”

“Well…he’ll be here next year.” I said with a smile,
“And even bigger, I’ll bet.”
He said, ”You’ll make a fisherman, Lad.
It’s not for the fish that we fish…

but for the great stories we get.” 

I still have that lure…and the rod and reel.
Still in their bags and boxes, just like new.
I thought about selling them on eBay,
But 57 years later, they have sentimental value.

You see…I’ve been invited to go fishin’ several times
By golfin’ buddies and other friends;
But for some reason…I really don’t know why…
I’ve never gone fishin’ again.

They say, “Truth is stranger than fiction.”
And I believe that is a fact.
I hope you enjoyed this bit of truth and,
In the meantime…..”Ya’ll come back!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/1/2018 10:38:00 PM
Good one Robert, been there. I still have a Mitchel 301. Great memories
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Date: 11/1/2018 8:41:00 AM
Great write Robert, superbly done!
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Date: 5/27/2015 5:23:00 AM
Awesome, long and clever
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Date: 5/3/2014 10:27:00 PM
Good.
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Date: 5/1/2014 2:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win, love those old Mitchels
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Date: 4/30/2014 5:05:00 PM
well, I hope this is true because I am falling for it "hook and sinker" A very well deserved win this is. Congrats to you.
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Date: 4/30/2014 6:07:00 AM
great story line and poem Robert congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 4/30/2014 5:11:00 AM
Enjoyed your write on fishing and congrats on the win, Robert
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Date: 4/30/2014 4:46:00 AM
Yes Robert ! truth is greater than fiction , yet fiction is truer ! Congrats on great winning poem !
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Date: 4/29/2014 10:32:00 PM
Whew, I know that must have been an great but difficult moment..letting that big one go...great story..well told. congrats. BG
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Date: 4/29/2014 6:13:00 PM
Life seems to eat up all the fishing time. Ain't it a pity? Congratulations on the ...catch and... The poem! RAY
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Date: 4/29/2014 5:11:00 PM
a long-winding, interesting way to discover life.. sweet congrats, robert!.. huggs
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Date: 4/29/2014 4:56:00 PM
WOW, Robert, what a day, and poem... Wonderful, to know these are the days, to treasure.... . Congratulations, in Caleb's "Gone Fishin'" contest.. always~ LINDA
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