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Welsh Winter : englyn

Sponsor : Mark Toney submitted: 12/7/25 ________________
weathering Wales in bleak winter is hard though starred sheep remain sleek taverns roaring fires a feat making Celtic maidens sweet
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Date: 7/12/2025 9:17:00 AM
Dear Ghairo, I enjoyed the desolate feeling of your first line, and the vibrant imagery that follows, that builds into the wonderful lively finale of your last line. There is so much here to linger over.. a vivid and enchanting piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 7/12/2025 10:39:00 AM
Oh Wow, Susan. ThkU for such a detailed comment on only a few lines. I do appreciate. x.
Date: 7/12/2025 7:52:00 AM
I love the wordplay here, as always you have a special and artistic way of expressing that makes your poems stand out really dear poetic soul, i love the alliterations and your choice of words plus the cadence of your lines so beautifully flowing! Im happy to see you also write more now, pleasure visiting you today, i hope you are doing well. Sending you light always
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 7/12/2025 10:40:00 AM
Hug, hug, Beautiful Light. Not to overdo your contributions here & become ill again ! smiley.
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 7/12/2025 10:35:00 AM
Hug, hug, Beautiful Light. Not to overdo your contributions here & become ill again ! smiley.

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