James Peranteau Poet Dramatic Verse

well yeah i beheld hern

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                                        at hern 
                                    prescription
                                     hern ingest
                                         nibble
                                          raven

                                           gulp

                                       i think'd i
                               said thuh mouth's
                                            full

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Sara Kendrick September 17, 2025 at 2:53 AM Whoa!! If I am reading that one correctly, I am wondering if you are sick to have to have that kind of medicine. Just fun'n I hope. Sara K James Peranteau September 18, 2025 at 5:59 AM "prescription" here, 'tiz merely the non-literal comparison dear poet... "beheld" 'twere mine think here..which, no doubt here means to have look'd at, observed, or perceived something with focused attention, often with awe or wonder, and in this thought, the "prescription" ordered by 'hern' wuz; to behold hern actionz,...thus, this write should add testament regard mine attention ,)