Well I Geuss Now You Notice

even when you're surrounded with love how you often feel you're all alone
 and even from your own home you feel the need to roam
 how always accompanied by many people seem you have no friend
 and somehow seems a loner even with your kin

 you crave for something so long and suddenly lose your appetite
 lusting after the luscious taste and full from just one bite
 you're chasing for so long to feel the touch of true love
 only to see everything go wrong finding out it's not what you thought it was

 you put forth so much effort in school studying to achieve a decent grade 
only to suffer the disappointment once we see what we really made
 yes! and the job market where we're thrown tossed and hurled
 and find ourselves bending over backward trying to move up in the world

 and what about how for other people the skies seems so blue 
and everyone's getting a peice of the pie . well at least everyone but you
 and to some life can be so pleasing but you only receive the stress and strain
 always trying to make it a little bit easy by just dealing with the pain

 how life steadily throwing punches at you and you stand and take it
 not giving up knowing that you're through but still trying to make it
 then after all hope is gone you find all your answers in God
 now beating yourself up saying if I'd only known i would have beaten the odds

















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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/7/2012 5:36:00 AM
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