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Well and Truly Spooked

We were four tough teens and one day at school we were dared
To spend a night in Hangman's Woods to prove we weren't scared,
We'd set up camp for the night then heard loud wailing and a moan
Sheer blind terror overcame us when we realised we weren't alone,
We ran as fast as our legs could carry us and we didn't look back
And made it to the woods entrance and there stood by an old shack,
Were our three so called school friends who'd set us up for the dare
They were laughing and pointing at us and all we could do was glare.




Written on the 25th October 2020

8 lines Of Spooky Rhyme Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin.

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Richard Lamoureux December 30, 2020 at 6:42 AM An enjoyable read. Happy New Year and thanks for your kind Visit. ;0) Tom Cunningham December 30, 2020 at 11:35 AM Thank you very much Richard, and I wish you too a very happy new year.. Tom

Jennifer Proxenos November 8, 2020 at 8:30 AM Tom, what a lovely win, there might have been some great entries, but yours soared high above them. Congratulations my friend. Blessing Tom, Jennifer. Tom Cunningham November 8, 2020 at 8:46 AM Thank you very much for your congratulations Jennifer, much appreciated. I hope you are well. Tom

Andrea Dietrich November 6, 2020 at 7:20 PM I see you got a win!! Congrats, my friend. Tom Cunningham November 7, 2020 at 4:18 AM Thank you very much Andrea, there was some great entries for this one. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2020 at 11:23 AM - Congratulations on your great win in this spooky contest, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Tom Cunningham November 6, 2020 at 12:42 PM Thank you very much Anne, Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Constance La France November 6, 2020 at 10:36 AM Tom, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance Tom Cunningham November 6, 2020 at 12:42 PM Thank you very much Constance, im happy you enjoyed it. I hope you are well. Tom

Carol Mitra November 6, 2020 at 12:58 AM Really a fun poem Tom....Congrats on your win. Tom Cunningham November 6, 2020 at 1:12 AM Thank you very much Carol, im pleased you enjoyed it. Tom

Tania Kitchin November 5, 2020 at 1:35 PM Tom congratulations on your first place win with your scary and fun poem, those were the days! Tom Cunningham November 5, 2020 at 2:27 PM Thank you very much Tania, happy days for sure, where did time go. Thank you too for hosting, you had your work cut out, there were some great entries. Tom

David Mchattie November 1, 2020 at 3:38 PM You can never have enough friends. We've all been at the end of some prank or another. Well penned my friend. Tom Cunningham November 2, 2020 at 12:34 AM Thank you very much David. Im happy you enjoyed it. You're right about being pranked, happy days. Tom

Heidi Sands November 1, 2020 at 5:44 AM Great suspenseful fun poem Tom :) Tom Cunningham November 1, 2020 at 8:03 AM Thank you very much Heidi, had many a scare in my youth lol. Tom

John Watt November 1, 2020 at 12:14 AM Ha, a great read, had me going until the very end. Hope you found some way to prank those pranksters. Best wishes in the contest, I expect this will do very well ~ John Tom Cunningham November 1, 2020 at 2:19 AM Thank you very much John, im glad you enjoyed it, as kids we were always winding each other up, often sailing close to the wind lol. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Angela Crabtree October 31, 2020 at 6:34 PM A great story, Tom. I really enjoyed it. :) Tom Cunningham November 1, 2020 at 2:17 AM Thank you very much Angela, im happy you enjoyed it. Tom

Michael Tor October 31, 2020 at 4:35 PM Tom the big Halloween for us was going trick or treating the day before. We got double the candy. What we do as kids. Enjoy your Halloween and stay out of those woods. Stay safe my friend... Michael Tor November 2, 2020 at 4:53 AM Lol Tom Cunningham November 1, 2020 at 2:17 AM Thank you very much Michael Don't worry ill keep the woods for daytime walks lol. Tom

Susan Ashley October 31, 2020 at 10:06 AM Haha! Oh, what a nasty prank! Tom, you had me running out of the woods with you! The spooky imagery and pace is excellent. Best wishes for a win, my friend.. ~Susan Tom Cunningham October 31, 2020 at 12:02 PM Thank you very much Susan, we sometimes look back at things we did in our childhood and wonder how we came out in one piece lol. Tom

Joanna Daniel October 30, 2020 at 7:26 AM Ah! They sure got you, Tom:) well written:) Tom Cunningham October 30, 2020 at 7:48 AM Lol, thanks very much Jo. Have a great weekend. Tom

Quoth Theraven October 29, 2020 at 7:56 AM Tom, Ollie ollie oxen free.,best of times when we tried to scare ourselves. Whether it be your Hangman's Woods or Alland's Creature from the Black Lagoon showing on a late late movie. Happy Halloween! -Richard Tom Cunningham October 29, 2020 at 7:59 AM Haha Thank you very much Richard, but they were happy days for sure. Happy Halloween to you too. Hope you're well Tom

Harry Horsman October 29, 2020 at 2:34 AM Oh those youth days, i guess will never change, great poem and story Tom... Tom Cunningham October 29, 2020 at 3:15 AM Thank you Harry, im glad you enjoyed it, we were invincible back then, you wonder where the time went. Tom

Kim Rodrigues October 28, 2020 at 8:09 AM Pointing at your friends, “tchh...tchhh.” Tom Cunningham October 28, 2020 at 8:42 AM Thank you Kim, we all did some wild things in our youth. Tom

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2020 at 7:27 AM oh, those pranksters of our youth. Some of us really got fooled!! Great tale for the scary rhyme contest! Tom Cunningham October 28, 2020 at 8:41 AM Thank you very much Andrea, stand by me was what inspired this one. Tom

Emilia James October 27, 2020 at 3:59 AM Typical kids lol, mind you they were brave to give it a try, enjoyed your wickedly fun tale, Emilia : ) Tom Cunningham October 27, 2020 at 4:28 AM Thank you Emilia, glad you enjoyed it, got inspired by that film stand by me. Tom

Sam Kauffman October 26, 2020 at 5:06 PM So clever, Tom - and eerie! I can relate. There was a small historic graveyard behind our neighborhood. We would go in at night and scare ourselves silly! This is spooky! Best of luck for the contest. Over Fork Over - but not in the graveyard! Tom Cunningham October 27, 2020 at 1:41 AM Thank you very much Sam, glad you liked it, those things we used to do as kids lol. Shame we have to grow up. Over Fork Over. Tom

Lindsay Laurie October 26, 2020 at 3:48 PM Hello Tom … really enjoyed the prank in the appropriate named ‘Hangman’s Woods’. How clever - thanks Tom - Lindsay Tom Cunningham October 26, 2020 at 4:13 PM Thank you very much Lindsay, glad you enjoyed it. Tom

Beryl Edmonds October 26, 2020 at 12:09 PM That gave me a laugh, though it must have been scary for you, nice friends I must say, but then boys will be boys. ~ Belle Tom Cunningham October 26, 2020 at 2:32 PM Thank you very much Belle, glad you enjoyed it. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu October 26, 2020 at 11:00 AM Hello Tom, I guess the school friends got even. enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 26, 2020 at 3:12 PM Hello Tom yes another verse would be nice. Yes thank you. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your evening my friend. Tom Cunningham October 26, 2020 at 11:34 AM Thank you Darlene, must do another verse and call it the revenge lol. Hope you're well Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2020 at 8:52 AM - Although they were cheated ... it was exciting ... great written, Tom ... this will make success in the contest, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Tom Cunningham October 26, 2020 at 11:33 AM Thank you very much Anne, im happy you enjoyed it. Tom

Alexis Y. October 26, 2020 at 8:44 AM Hi Tom, What a good entry for the contest . The curiosity and adrenaline rush from a dare can be quite alluring. But the not knowing is kicker. Those boys found that out fast . I found it to be well written and suspenseful. Good build up as well.Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis Tom Cunningham October 26, 2020 at 11:33 AM Thank you Alexis, watching Stand by me was the inspiration for this one Im glad you enjoyed it. Tom

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