We'Ll All Feel Fine

Don’t go walking in the forest where the trees have fingers
And the lions go aprowling and the moon hangs low
Don’t go skipping through the alleyways of strange dark shadows
Don’t you dawdle where it’s lonely. Oh my child, don’t go.

Stay here by the fire where the kitten’s furry purry
And the fire snaps and crickle cracks and kettles fairly shine
And the popcorn it kerpopples and the tea is sweet with lemon
And we’ll dine on butter brickle and we’ll all feel fine.

Don’t go tripping by the frozen lake where ice is blue as glaciers
Don’t get caught up in the wild wind and blown up by the storm
Don’t go hiking where the polar bears will growl from hibernation
Stay here by the fire where it’s always safe and warm

And we’ll sing our hearts like multicolored dream-furled flowers
And we’ll throw our arms around each other, dance away the time
And we’ll stare in crazy wonder at the storm through the window
And we’ll play the hurdygurdy and we’ll all feel fine.

Now the fire’s nearly dying and the shadows are much closer
And your featherbed is comfy where the eaves hang low
And your eyes are getting heavy, child. The cabin’s warm and cozy
And we’ll always be together, so to sleep you’ll go.

The wind’s no longer howling and the snow is drifting softly
And the kitten’s curled and snoring and the round moon shines
And the love we share together is so safe and true and perfect
So we’ll dream until tomorrow and we’ll all feel fine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/23/2009 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Debra. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:47:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Debra! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:26:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:50:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/9/2009 2:57:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
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Date: 12/8/2009 4:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Debra. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2009 4:55:00 PM
Dear Debra, Congratulations on YOU POEM " We'll All Feel Fine" being Featured this week It starts off a bit on the dark side but I Love how it ends with the gift of Tomorrow Superbly Done ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:58:00 PM
Hi Debra, Congrats on your feature poem this week! Enjoyed. Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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Date: 12/6/2009 11:41:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
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Date: 8/24/2009 2:41:00 PM
A delightful read Debra, thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem>>James
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Date: 5/15/2009 5:47:00 PM
a foreboding begininig that reaches deep into the mind and slowly but greatly brings about hope, peace and love and a better day and time in the future wonderfully written and Thank you for your thoughts and words about my poem,,,blessings..Cecil
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