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Well-Meaning Counsel

I'm writing to you, youth of today, hoping you will read my words of advice. I know you think you've heard it all many times before, the well-meaning counsel from others, but don't tune me out just yet, and please don't roll your eyes at me. You'd be wise to open them to see what life has to offer. Your mind and heart will often wish to walk down two different paths. Time and again you've heard it said, "Follow your heart," but believe me when I say, "Your heart can be treacherous." Too often it beats in rhythm so loud that it ignores the thoughts inside your head. I've fallen victim to my own heart, so I write to you after suffering from heartache. I encourage you to let your conscience be your guiding light, and if you do, you'll walk away from shadows that would lead you into darkness. It's important that you respect others, as well as yourself. Do not disregard the quality of self-esteem; it's a crutch you should proudly lean upon. Place a high value on the goals you strive to reach, always aiming higher for more. Pay attention to what life has to teach you, and never lose sight of right and wrong. Be strong in faith, and believe in a higher being. Be humble enough to admit your faults, never giving up on the virtue of hope, for you will find it has the power to heal the emotional wounds you are bound to feel. Do not doubt yourself on the word of others. They may cause you to stumble. Have confidence in yourself to rise and continue on your way, knowing that tomorrow the sun will rise on a brand new day. If it helps to lighten your burden, it's perfectly fine if you cry. Remember this... no one is perfect, so forgive yourself and move on instead of wallowing in pity or shame as a victim pointing a finger of blame. Looking at people in the eye will help you to avoid telling them a lie, resulting in feelings of guilt. I know I've given you a lot to ponder, but if you do, I promise that the person in the mirror looking back at you will often be wearing a smile. December 23, 2020 Edward Ibeh's Contest: Your Advice to the Youth

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Date: 12/31/2020 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" Write. Your pen was working overtime on this this. Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings.................
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 3:46:00 AM
Sometimes my pen doesn't know when to give it up. lol I had to turn off the lights so it would stop! Thank you, Paula.
Date: 12/30/2020 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations, Jenna, on your Top Placement for this impressively great piece of advice to young writers!! Wish you a Very Happy New Year!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 3:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Newton, and Happy New Year to you, too.
Date: 12/30/2020 7:02:00 PM
A Beautiful piece of Advice to the youth...Congrats on your Top Win dear Jenna :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 3:45:00 AM
Thank you very much, Carol.
Date: 12/30/2020 5:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win Jenna! Well done!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 3:44:00 AM
Thanks a bunch, Mark.
Date: 12/30/2020 4:15:00 PM
Wonderful advice from your talented pen, Jenna--BIG congrats on your win at the TOP of first place.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 3:44:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Vijay.
Date: 12/30/2020 3:14:00 PM
WoW!Jenna, Excellent advice to youth. I found it to be like a personal or relatable letter to the youth. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/30/2020 3:17:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind thoughts, Alexis.
Date: 12/30/2020 2:08:00 PM
I'm wearing a smile knowing you got a podium placement Jenna, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/30/2020 3:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan. You're always supportive of my poetry, and it's greatly appreciated.
Date: 12/30/2020 1:25:00 PM
Congrats on your top win! A wise poem! only if they would listen!! Enjoy the win and have a great New Year!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/30/2020 3:16:00 PM
Thank you, Krish. Happy New Year to you, too.
Date: 12/30/2020 10:58:00 AM
This exceptional poem is full of wisdom, Jenna:-) Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st place in my contest!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/30/2020 3:16:00 PM
I'm very honored with your praise on this poem. Thanks so much, Edward.
Date: 12/30/2020 8:38:00 AM
This is a great win. Congrats!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/30/2020 3:15:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Lei.
Date: 12/30/2020 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations!!! Well written, counselor! and I mean it and also want it with humor. So much words of wisdom. Happy New Year.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/30/2020 3:15:00 PM
Thank you very much, Marilene.
Date: 12/23/2020 3:50:00 PM
This is filled with wisdom and truth, inspirations to counsel all youth. God B L E S S you with a beautiful Christmas dear lady :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/24/2020 5:44:00 AM
Thanks, Regina, and happy holidays to you, as well.
Date: 12/23/2020 2:25:00 PM
Wise advice indeed and I love that closing statement Jenna, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/24/2020 5:44:00 AM
Thanks so very much for mentioning what you especially liked, Jan.
Date: 12/23/2020 8:03:00 AM
Now that is some sound advice! I feel like you are stalking me on the posts. Lol
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2020 8:36:00 AM
haha.... nah uh.

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