Welcome To a Brand New World

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A positive message of hope for a better world based on the Lord's prayer!

Matt 6:9,10 Our Father in the heavens, let your name be sanctified, Let your Kingdom come

let your will be done ON EARTH, as it is in heaven.

This prayer indicates we want God's will to be done on earth like it is in heaven.

How does it happen?  When his Kingdom (government) comes!

Welcome to a brand new world

Verse 1
How are you feeling right now?
Is there still a yearning in your heart?
You're probably like, ten million or more,
praying for a brand new start

Verse 2
What happened to the world you imagined?
Where justice and peace ruled the day...
Is it merely a dream or wishful thinking,
a fantasy that leads you astray


Chorus
Welcome to a brand new world...
where evil men cannot be found
No reason to fear the nighttime,
a place where you feel safe and sound
This is not just a dream...it's reality,
joy in the heart of each boy and girl,
Welcome to a brand new world!


Verse 3
God has shown us how to love
So why is true peace elusive?
Monsters and imposters hide who they are,
they send out doves with a Judas kiss


Verse 4
It's been about two thousand years now
Praying for God's kingdom to come
Now's not the time to lose patience or faith,
it's time for God's will to be done


Chorus
Welcome to a brand new world...
where evil men cannot be found
No reason to fear the nighttime,
a place where you feel safe and sound
This is not just a dream...it's reality,
joy in the heart of each boy and girl,
Welcome to a brand new world!

Welcome to a brand new world!
Welcome to a brand new world!
Welcome to a brand new world!

repeat and fade

John Derek Hamilton
December 13,2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/26/2020 10:12:00 AM
I read this and I thought it had been written recently. I was utterly amazed to find it was written in early Dec. I believe a brand new world is on it's way. It has to be we are no longer a sustainable race. I'm going to be thinking about this all day :)
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Date: 4/26/2020 10:21:00 AM
Thanks Heather nice to see you pass by today, glad you can see what's coming, it will get worse though before it gets better!
Date: 1/5/2020 11:18:00 AM
I agree, can't wait. But need to be patient & wait till all things take place according to Jehovah's will. When he makes the whole world a Paradise. Take care. T. O.
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Date: 1/5/2020 12:18:00 PM
Thanks T.O it is going to be reality, we need to endure, thanks for your great comment!
Date: 12/20/2019 11:27:00 AM
So true, "they send out doves with a Judas kiss"; is there or has there every been such a things as justice on our planet? I don't think there has been since the dawn of humankind. Perhaps one day? Well penned.
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/5/2020 12:16:00 PM
Yes it's true, humans have caused nothing but trouble since the day of creation and disobedience from God, but as the song shows there is hope for paradise to be restored to the earth. Glad you liked it enough to comment M.L!
Date: 12/16/2019 7:33:00 AM
and the world will be as He originally intended, filled with peace and joy. Your lyrical message belongs in our song book, John. Perfect title.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/16/2019 11:56:00 AM
Seriously, you should do that.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/16/2019 11:48:00 AM
So true Lin, thanks for your great comment, I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Maybe it could be one of our original songs, have to see how to send it off to HQ.
Date: 12/14/2019 9:30:00 PM
John, this is one of my favorites of yours and yet you write these beautifully all the time. I am saving this masterpiece! A FAV :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/15/2019 8:27:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi for your enthusiastic reaction to this write, I'm so glad you liked it enough to fave it, so kind of you to visit and leave a great comment!
Date: 12/14/2019 8:48:00 PM
There are many views on this subject. I will say how thankful I am that God knows all. He will take care of His own. My heart rejoices knowing this fact. ~ Brandy
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Date: 12/14/2019 9:08:00 PM
Thanks Brandy I appreciate your viewpoint, indeed God knows who belong to him. I do look forward to paradise on earth soon to come. Thanks for passing by and leaving your thoughts!
Date: 12/14/2019 12:21:00 PM
John, you have penned a beautiful picture of what our world should be. We can only pray that one day this vision will come true. Merry Christmas my friend. John
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Date: 12/14/2019 12:49:00 PM
Thanks John for your kind words, that's why we pray the Lords prayer for his kingdom to come and restore paradise on earth who wouldn't want to live there! Thanks for your kind wishes, I don't celebrate it, but thanks for your thoughts!
Date: 12/14/2019 8:13:00 AM
Inspiring lyrics John--I really liked the upbeat message in the chorus--it spells the essence of your write.
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Date: 12/14/2019 12:47:00 PM
Thanks Vijay, glad you liked it enough to comment, imagine paradise on earth, who wouldn't want to live there!
Date: 12/13/2019 9:49:00 PM
This is beautiful John...if only the world were as beautiful here as heaven, such an upbeat set of lyrics...i love this :) hugs
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Date: 12/14/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thanks Sandy, I thought you might comment on this, it's not for everyone's taste...so thank you. We believe this will be reality soon, the Bibles message is clear in the beginning paradise was lost, and in the end paradise will be restored to the earth, we hope to live to see it!
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