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Welcome the Sabbath

On Sabbath eve, the Moon shines brighter The door now closed on weekday time As angels enter earthly realms On Sabbath eve, the Moon shines brighter The Stars do twinkle in the skies Light Man's way to Sabbath Castles On Sabbath eve, the Moon shines brighter The Door now closed on Weekday Time...

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/17/2019 8:16:00 PM

Your Sabbath Eve sounds delightful; maybe it is more delightful in Chicago where people are shutting the door on weekday time. Some of us are working on the weekend, which is probably a mistake. I like it that the "moon shines brighter" on Sabbath Eve!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/18/2019 11:10:00 PM

What can you do (about working on the weekend, that is!) -- No easy answers... :) gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/17/2019 12:49:00 PM

Flows like honey. Well done, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/27/2019 10:59:00 AM

Thought you'd be interested and pleased to know that I've just updated this poem in line with your recommendation. I.e., lines 1, 4, and 7 are now exactly the same. Thank you so much for the suggestion! ~ Best wishes, Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/17/2019 3:48:00 PM

Gee, that's really, really nice to hear (read). I can't ask for any more from myself than to evoke a comment like you've sent me. Thank you soooooooo much, Line. Happy Friday and Weekend! ~ gw