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Whispering warm hope and faith within Whimsical wisps of affectionate wishes Wakening waltzes that dance wildly Wanderlust winds breathe gentle warnings Wakeless weathers ragged edges with Widening worlds where we never worry Weathering woes that seek to warrant Wallowing, wooing watery tears wailing Wasting wayward ideas that will worship Wherever wonders caress the soul with Walks whistling out echoes of watercolor Wrapped with God’s arms open, welcoming Luke 15:20 KJV: And he arose, and came to his father. But when he was yet a great way off, his father saw him, and had compassion, and ran, and fell on his neck, and kissed him. ALLITERATION REGARDING RELATIONSHIP WITH GOD Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Beata Agustin August 27, 2020

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/30/2020 5:27:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing your faith through this poetic muse of yours regarding your vibrant relationship with the Lord. Your last line is so delightful to the spirit: "Wrapped with God’s arms open, welcoming." God bless you.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/29/2020 10:59:00 AM

Worship on wings of poetic words, Gina! I love the story of the Prodigal Son - wonderful foundation for your verse. Congratulations on your win!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/29/2020 8:23:00 AM

Very powerful Regina. I love the structure you used. Congratulations on the win!

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2020 10:12:00 AM

Woah that is a lot of Ws, you did this very well...

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/27/2020 5:55:00 AM

Welded words wonderfully! I expect this took a fair bit of work in structuring. I have no doubt all alliteration came easily. Beauty for the Contest, Regina - a top Win is in store.