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Welcome back to you my misery played out for all the world to see bright lights and caricature circling even buzzards want a piece of me Shifts shred the tempo shallow troubles bellow in a chamber broken down below emptiness echoes from beyond the mouth with the bass a drown recluse obo hum Moving with mountains a sound enjoyed matted brush and worn-out weathered trails can only guide so far missing the post birch tree beauty notched and polished Carry me on home Delilah as the night wanders alone

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Date: 6/30/2017 6:55:00 AM
You sure writing about the blues Tim such intense loneliness, a powerful sad piece:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/25/2017 8:46:00 AM
Da blues.. big time. Wowsa! The "grabsya in this is off the charts. Happy day amigo ~ j
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Date: 6/24/2017 9:51:00 AM
Hi Tim , powerful sadness ' even buzzards want a piece of me ' :))hugs
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Date: 6/23/2017 6:00:00 PM
i like the metaphors, and the mood--sullenly engaging...a beauty, tim..huggs
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Date: 6/23/2017 5:57:00 PM
That's not the type of guest we like...but we like your verse lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/23/2017 5:53:00 PM
Misery loves company, Tim. Very sad write!
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Date: 6/23/2017 4:39:00 PM
Sadly written and heart breaking my friend.
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Date: 6/23/2017 4:06:00 PM
Ah, but at least we have the same friend! Even if alone.
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Date: 6/23/2017 2:52:00 PM
- The end of this poem Tim ... brought your lines to a higher level !!! - Love that end !!! :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/23/2017 2:32:00 PM
Such loneliness and regret felt with this one with a powerful ending, Tim.
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Date: 6/23/2017 2:29:00 PM
That.... is a special poem my friend...with a deep loneliness in there.
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Date: 6/23/2017 2:26:00 PM
That is my poet friend, Timotheos with his charming muse! Excellent my friend!
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