Barbara Gorelick Poet Alliteration

Weird Willy

Wacky Willie whittled while whistling weirdly
Widow Winnie winced at Willie's wacky whistling-
And wrecked Willie's weird wooden whittled whistle.......


Woefull winded grandchildren whooped with delight...
If you havent guessed..lol ...for the Tongue Twister contest...

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 31, 2011 at 11:49 AM Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's "Big Kid Tongue Twister" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

John Freeman October 29, 2011 at 7:57 PM Haaaaaa! That first line is a great one, Barbara. Agape, Moses

Gwendolen Song October 29, 2011 at 8:27 AM Weird lil Willy was whistling without his whistle when he found out his creator won a spot in this Tongue Twistin' Contest! Congrats on your placement in my contest, Barbara! I loved the rolling w's and the image of humor you portrayed. Love, Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta October 29, 2011 at 7:42 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Gwen, Barbara

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2011 at 4:13 PM very well done, Barbara. Am I imagining this though? I thought I saw that she wanted only two lines. Check it out. I could be wrong. I wish I had more time to spend here. It's killing me not to have time here like I used to and I hope my life becomes normal again. Luv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire October 3, 2011 at 3:08 PM That surely twisted my tongue, dear LNC! Made me laugh as well. Wishing you success in the contest. Saw HG's last poem and am confused about his diagnosis. Hope you will join me in praying for him. Love, Carolyn

John Smith October 2, 2011 at 10:18 PM Which Willie wistfully wanted whilst watching Winnie's wanton, willful waste. Too much fun.