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Weird Willy

Wacky Willie whittled while whistling weirdly
Widow Winnie winced at Willie's wacky whistling-
And wrecked Willie's weird wooden whittled whistle.......


Woefull winded grandchildren whooped with delight...
If you havent guessed..lol ...for the Tongue Twister contest...

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/31/2011 11:49:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's "Big Kid Tongue Twister" contest Barbara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 10/29/2011 7:57:00 PM Haaaaaa! That first line is a great one, Barbara. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 10/29/2011 8:27:00 AM Weird lil Willy was whistling without his whistle when he found out his creator won a spot in this Tongue Twistin' Contest! Congrats on your placement in my contest, Barbara! I loved the rolling w's and the image of humor you portrayed. Love, Gwendolen Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/29/2011 7:42:00 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Gwen, Barbara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/5/2011 4:13:00 PM very well done, Barbara. Am I imagining this though? I thought I saw that she wanted only two lines. Check it out. I could be wrong. I wish I had more time to spend here. It's killing me not to have time here like I used to and I hope my life becomes normal again. Luv, andrea Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/3/2011 3:08:00 PM That surely twisted my tongue, dear LNC! Made me laugh as well. Wishing you success in the contest. Saw HG's last poem and am confused about his diagnosis. Hope you will join me in praying for him. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

John Smith Date: 10/2/2011 10:18:00 PM Which Willie wistfully wanted whilst watching Winnie's wanton, willful waste. Too much fun. Login to Reply