Weeping Willow

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Weeping willow tree

comfort limbs wrapped around me

wiping tears away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/29/2018 1:53:00 PM
Nice Haiku...love the imagery!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/29/2018 3:30:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/21/2018 10:00:00 AM
Very creative!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/21/2018 1:19:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 5/7/2018 4:53:00 AM
That's a thing of beauty Susan. I really like it. Les
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/21/2018 1:20:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 5/4/2018 5:17:00 PM
Creative work. Not a very comfortable place to go to wipe tears away though. Sara
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/4/2018 5:41:00 PM
Thank you, Sara, for reading and commenting. I used to spend a lot of time under my grandparent's willow tree, mostly reading, a few times crying... was my own place away.
Date: 5/3/2018 3:35:00 AM
Sad in a way but beautiful in balance
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/3/2018 5:45:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: 2/19/2016 10:27:00 PM
OOooh I love this one! Your play on words between "weeping" and "tears" ... really cool! And it's funny because I actually wrote a haiku that made that connection ... though I think yours is more emotionally engaging than mine.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/23/2016 1:34:00 AM
Why thank you! Appreciate your comments. I'll check yours out.
Date: 2/10/2016 1:55:00 PM
Very lovely and touching, Susan. Many sentimental poets feel a closeness with willows. Well done! // paul
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/23/2016 1:33:00 AM
Thank you Paul! I appreciate your comment. Sorry so late responding.
Date: 2/6/2016 12:01:00 PM
Beauty in beauty, beautiful haiku my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/7/2016 2:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for such a great comment!
Date: 2/4/2016 2:01:00 PM
- A wonderful three and a beautiful haiku poem, Susan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/5/2016 7:11:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 2/4/2016 8:40:00 AM
Excellent haiku, Susan! Loved this :) A 7!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/5/2016 7:09:00 PM
Why thank you so very much Laura! Awesome!
Date: 2/4/2016 8:39:00 AM
weeping willows I Loved to climb when childhood was still mine because I could always find a peaceful way to spend my time while in the tree avoiding the heat of sunshine....very cute write susan....;)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/5/2016 7:08:00 PM
And you are so very kind, with compliments that blow my mind, please stop by anytime. :)
Date: 2/4/2016 7:16:00 AM
Lovely, I love the poem and willow trees!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/5/2016 7:05:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Very kind.
Date: 2/4/2016 4:14:00 AM
Now this is what a call a Haiku masterpiece, Susan, and going straight to my favorite list.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/5/2016 6:59:00 PM
Thanks Elaine! What a wonderful comment. I am honored.
Date: 2/4/2016 4:07:00 AM
so so beautiful Susan a delightful haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/5/2016 6:49:00 PM
Thanks Jan! hugs..
Date: 2/4/2016 2:35:00 AM
I love Weeping Willows and relate to the sentiment in your poem. They are alive with grace, charm and uniqueness, among other qualities. Great emotion in your Haiku ... CayCay
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/5/2016 6:44:00 PM
Thank you CayCay! Appreciate you reading this and your comments. Very kind.
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