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Weeping Willow

Weeping willow tree

comfort limbs wrapped around me

wiping tears away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gist Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Nice Haiku...love the imagery!
Gentry Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 3:30 PM
Thank you.
Woodsinger Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Very creative!
Gentry Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 1:19 PM
Thanks!
Wilson Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 4:53 AM
That's a thing of beauty Susan. I really like it. Les
Gentry Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Thanks!
Kendrick Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 5:17 PM
Creative work. Not a very comfortable place to go to wipe tears away though. Sara
Gentry Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 5:41 PM
Thank you, Sara, for reading and commenting. I used to spend a lot of time under my grandparent's willow tree, mostly reading, a few times crying... was my own place away.
Wade Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 3:35 AM
Sad in a way but beautiful in balance
Gentry Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 5:45 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Hicks Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 10:27 PM
OOooh I love this one! Your play on words between "weeping" and "tears" ... really cool! And it's funny because I actually wrote a haiku that made that connection ... though I think yours is more emotionally engaging than mine.
Gentry Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 1:34 AM
Why thank you! Appreciate your comments. I'll check yours out.
Callus Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 1:55 PM
Very lovely and touching, Susan. Many sentimental poets feel a closeness with willows. Well done! // paul
Gentry Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 1:33 AM
Thank you Paul! I appreciate your comment. Sorry so late responding.
Devnath  Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Beauty in beauty, beautiful haiku my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Gentry Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Thank you so much for such a great comment!
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 2:01 PM
- A wonderful three and a beautiful haiku poem, Susan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentry Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 7:11 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Glad you enjoyed :)
Leiser Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Excellent haiku, Susan! Loved this :) A 7!
Gentry Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Why thank you so very much Laura! Awesome!
Boddie Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:39 AM
weeping willows I Loved to climb when childhood was still mine because I could always find a peaceful way to spend my time while in the tree avoiding the heat of sunshine....very cute write susan....;)
Gentry Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 7:08 PM
And you are so very kind, with compliments that blow my mind, please stop by anytime. :)
Showalter Swift Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:16 AM
Lovely, I love the poem and willow trees!
Gentry Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 7:05 PM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Very kind.
George   Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 4:14 AM
Now this is what a call a Haiku masterpiece, Susan, and going straight to my favorite list.
Gentry Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 6:59 PM
Thanks Elaine! What a wonderful comment. I am honored.
Allison Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 4:07 AM
so so beautiful Susan a delightful haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentry Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Thanks Jan! hugs..
Godwin Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 2:35 AM
I love Weeping Willows and relate to the sentiment in your poem. They are alive with grace, charm and uniqueness, among other qualities. Great emotion in your Haiku ... CayCay
Gentry Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Thank you CayCay! Appreciate you reading this and your comments. Very kind.
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