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Weeping Willow

The breeze of the morn she sought. Her eyes were wild, as she thought. Her hands tremble like a leaf on a tree. She marked her steps silently. Sylphlike is her frame. She was a lady not a dame. Within a distance, she looks back. The mansion, she found, was in blackness. So many skeletons remain. Her cape begins to skein. Angst, she releases a sigh. The tears she would cry. Lithe, she bends, as agile as the breeze as the wind. Interchangeability she disallows, as she raised her head up to the clouds. Perhaps, she thinks, life has been lived. Ideology misconstrued she perceived. This lady was once of rank. But, now her spirit sank. No authority does she has. Moreover, no one cares. The breeze of morning she seeks to find inner peace. Her story, she feels, must not be shared too much pain to reveal. She will not let the world in. A dead life ends. The beginning of a generation is her discourse. She will stiffen her backbone and reform. Solidify from the melodrama, she walks within determination. Her ideas begin to form via life manifestations. She hears the past as if it was now. She frowns and shouts aloud. “Why has my life defeated me?” The vision recedes and she feels that victory is guaranteed. “Who will cut me down?” She ponders, as she turns around. She had secluded herself to well. She was not the one to change that. "When my existence," she reflects, "is so well kempt idiosyncrasies are mine to consider." Remoteness defines the trees. She has entered the morning breeze. Pulling her cape close, she breathed in to establish hope. Via internal dialogue she spoke. “I must linger in the unknown.” ________________________| PENNED ON AUGUST 17, 2014!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/25/2014 8:14:00 AM
Great sentimental write Verlena! Loved it much, congrats on huge win!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/25/2014 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Upma for your congrats! Verlena
Date: 9/23/2014 9:41:00 PM
hehe hehe, Anytime, I'm smiling cuz, I'm back so soon. LOL, you know me. Thank you for the extra reply to my comment. You are too sweet. Linda
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Date: 9/23/2014 9:34:00 PM
thank you for the reply to my comment. Linda
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/23/2014 9:37:00 PM
You are welcome... Verlena
Date: 9/23/2014 3:50:00 PM
An amazing tale Verlena...congrats Tim
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/23/2014 7:30:00 PM
Thanks Tim for your congrats... Verlena
Date: 9/23/2014 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations Verlena.. :) like your first paragraph among all
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/23/2014 1:45:00 PM
Thanks Olive for the congrats... Verlena
Date: 9/23/2014 7:54:00 AM
Lovely use of metaphor. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/23/2014 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Debbie for you supportive response and the congratulations. Verlena
Date: 9/23/2014 12:03:00 AM
I read it three times to grasp more each time. Your vocabulary is so much more than mine so I have to really study it but you did a marvelous job Verlena and I congratulate you on this superb poem .
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/23/2014 12:09:00 AM
Thanks Brenda for the congratulations. Verlena
Date: 9/22/2014 11:29:00 PM
many congrats on your win in PD's contest, nicely penned
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/22/2014 11:57:00 PM
Thanks Francine for your congratulations. This is sorta a big win for me in PD contest. Finally I get a very high mark of 2nd place. Smile with me, Verlena!
Date: 9/22/2014 9:26:00 PM
Hi Verlena, Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/22/2014 9:44:00 PM
Thanks PD for the congratulations. Sending you a smile, Verlena...
Date: 8/18/2014 4:38:00 PM
The breeze of life doe not lie, the unknown leads to the great search. " Remoteness defines the trees...Why has my life defeated me..." This is poetic psychology that i can really chew on Verlena. Reminds of the Roman Triumph custom for victorious Generals who had a slave ride with them in the charriot with the laurel, whispering that glory is fleeting. J.A.B.
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Date: 8/18/2014 6:08:00 PM
It is the concept that aspects Justin. Enjoy the moment to recapture in bliss... Agreed! Verlena
Date: 8/17/2014 6:11:00 PM
Yes I know that, however it did not evoke the emotion for me for some reason.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/17/2014 6:15:00 PM
Oh, I see. Her sadness is her strength. A theme about self-well vs. self-worth. Verlena, sending a hug Rick...
Date: 8/17/2014 8:01:00 AM
For some reason this one hasn't grabbed me, I will come back to it another day and try again.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/17/2014 1:55:00 PM
Thanks Rick... It is about sadness... Verlena

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