Weeping Willow

Mom sure loved willow switches.
Those willows never wore out,
she’d make them sing forever.
Worse, I had to pick them out.

I needed to change some things,
mom did not ask for this mess.
Time for me to grow up some.
My first switch, too small.

At thirteen and six foot tall,
I then tore down half a tree.
“No more whippings for me mom!”
Mom cried tears of joy!


For the TREES EVERYWHERE contest entered by John Trusty. A true story 
and I made sure to never make my mother cry again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 5:56 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
Grisetti Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 10:36 AM
I really like this poem about a loving son. My sons still make me cry, but usually out of happiness. Well written - enjoyed it.
Kendrick Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 5:46 PM
Enjoyed reading this one this eve..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Sara
Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 8:39 AM
Good work, luck in contest and take care of your mother. -oxox love Anne-Lise
Scholtz Avatar
February 14, 2012 at 6:04 PM
Lovely set Dodoitsu John, good luvk in the contest, love Elizabeth
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