weeping rain

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Poetry/Verse/weeping rain
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1676-225-25
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, September 25, 2024
For the International Contest, Bite Size No 91
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 11/11/2024

Second Place

PRAYING ANGEL #2 Moss covered statue in cemetery Instant digital download original Agezinder art photography

"a dagger of pain, a tear of grief"

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nearby a moss covered angel kneels in prayer
hands grasped she weeps in the autumn rain 
oh, this mournful image touches my soul
and among the stained glass leaves flowers are fading 
at mom's grave I lay rose-colored roses already wilted
knowing in hours they too ... will be withering

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Len Gasun

Date: 11/12/2024 5:50:00 AM

Sad but stunningly beautiful dear poet friend Constance. Congratulations on your top win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs

Constance La France
Date: 11/12/2024 1:40:00 PM

Len, thank you for the lovely compliment and the congratulations, blessings and hugs, Constance

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/26/2024 8:08:00 PM

This is a touching poem. The wilted roses remind me of the saying, "It's the thought that counts. I've noticed forgotten memories reappear at the gravesite.

Constance La France
Date: 9/27/2024 1:41:00 PM

Hilda, thank you for the compliment and comment, a walk in the cemetery is very humbling and peaceful, Constance

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