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Weeping Mist Lento Poetry

Weep the clouds, a somber pall, deep the veil, soft cooling mist. Creep and drip from the vines, steep the world in ghostly mist. Sweep along the garden wall, keep bees from the blooms. Sleep, now does the earth, awaiting. Reap memories from mists perfume.
For the contest: Lento Poetry Sponsored by Rick Parise Placement: 5th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/14/2011 1:00:00 PM
My favorite..congrats. BG
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Date: 8/13/2011 8:14:00 PM
lovely, just musical and charming..makes one want to sit out in the rain...Congrad's Light & love
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Date: 8/13/2011 3:54:00 PM
Please excuse hasty congrats - I'm posting before I got logged out again. Many congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Rick, Paula
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Date: 8/13/2011 10:42:00 AM
Love this poem, so nice and I pictured everything. Beautiful. thank you for sharing. Lee
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Date: 8/13/2011 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by ^Rick Parise "Lento Poetry" Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2011 8:27:00 AM
hey Paula, congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/12/2011 11:42:00 PM
Congrats Paula on an exciting win in Lento Poetry contest with this lovely composition my friend..also Rick asked me to pass on his congrats as well..luv..
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Date: 8/12/2011 9:48:00 PM
Congratulations Paula on your well deserved win...enjoyed.
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Date: 8/12/2011 4:15:00 PM
Ooopps.. Congrats Paula, not paua...i think i gave u a new name....lol.... again.... this is really lovely
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Date: 8/12/2011 4:11:00 PM
Congrats Paua...this is beautiful...very well penned....luv....chiquita
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Date: 7/30/2011 7:45:00 AM
A very well-penned Lento. I really enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 7/23/2011 8:44:00 PM
Enjoyed your quatrain Paula, have a good weekend,..p.d.
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