Weeping Mist Lento Poetry

Weep the clouds, a somber pall, deep the veil, soft cooling mist. Creep and drip from the vines, steep the world in ghostly mist. Sweep along the garden wall, keep bees from the blooms. Sleep, now does the earth, awaiting. Reap memories from mists perfume.
For the contest: Lento Poetry Sponsored by Rick Parise Placement: 5th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gorelick Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 1:00 PM
My favorite..congrats. BG
Guzzi Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 8:14 PM
lovely, just musical and charming..makes one want to sit out in the rain...Congrad's Light & love
Horne Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 3:54 PM
Please excuse hasty congrats - I'm posting before I got logged out again. Many congrats on all your wins : )
Mehta Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Rick, Paula
Ramage Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 10:42 AM
Love this poem, so nice and I pictured everything. Beautiful. thank you for sharing. Lee
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by ^Rick Parise "Lento Poetry" Paula. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 8:27 AM
hey Paula, congrats on your win David
Sweetheart Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 11:42 PM
Congrats Paula on an exciting win in Lento Poetry contest with this lovely composition my friend..also Rick asked me to pass on his congrats as well..luv..
Poet Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 9:48 PM
Congratulations Paula on your well deserved win...enjoyed.
Baity Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 4:15 PM
Ooopps.. Congrats Paula, not paua...i think i gave u a new name....lol.... again.... this is really lovely
Baity Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 4:11 PM
Congrats Paua...this is beautiful...very well penned....luv....chiquita
Osita Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 7:45 AM
A very well-penned Lento. I really enjoyed reading it.
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July 23, 2011 at 8:44 PM
Enjoyed your quatrain Paula, have a good weekend,..p.d.
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