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Weep Willow Weep

Weep willow weep your weary winter woe
At the sight of your icy, new trousseau,
Above the frosted brook, a mirror faux
Her reflection was horribly so-so,
With rigid branches laced in flakey snow 
White, a favorite color, not hers though,
Clear crystals clung, dressing her to and fro
All stitched on by a hand who did not sew, 
Frozen stiff, her tears slow their new tempo.



(November 8th, 2022)

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/2/2022 10:37:00 AM

So plaintive and melancholy a picture of the willow in winter Kelly. Interesting rhymes. Congratulations on your win. All the best.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/30/2022 3:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sam

W J Clarke

Date: 12/1/2022 12:11:00 PM

I can feel the cold mood surrounding this beautiful written poem. Really well expressed. Congratulations!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/17/2022 10:28:00 AM

Thank you so much!

Len Gasun

Date: 12/1/2022 8:02:00 AM

Such a very beautiful and well-crafted monorhyme poem with alliteration my dearest friend, Kelly. I extremely enjoyed reading your poem this evening. Congratulations on your win! Thank you so much for sharing. God bless. Hugs

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/16/2022 4:04:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly, my dear friend, Len... Glad you enjoyed this one... Hugs :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/1/2022 7:52:00 AM

Dear Kelly, your poetic finesse captures the mood of the wintry weeping willow with finesse. I enjoyed your rich textured imagery, especially, "Above the frosted brook, a mirror faux" - whoa! Such great monorhymes throughout. Congratulations for your excellent win in William's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/16/2022 3:49:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan... Glad you enjoyed this one!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/1/2022 5:13:00 AM

Beautiful writing. Hearing from you after a long time. Congratulations!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/16/2022 3:48:00 PM

Thank you very, very much!

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/1/2022 4:06:00 AM

Congratulations for your win :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/16/2022 3:46:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/30/2022 9:50:00 PM

An eloquent metaphorical monorhyme you have penned, Kelly. My compliments on your top placing win, Aloha William

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/16/2022 7:57:00 AM

Thank you, William... It was a pleasure to participate in your contest. I enjoyed the challenge!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2022 3:52:00 AM

So very descriptive is this one. I do enjoy seeing weeping willows. I had one my back yard, but it started dying and we had to remove it. You have done a very good job on giving some personification to this willow and the ice and snow. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:17:00 AM

You're welcome, my friend, always a pleasure... Thank you, too, for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poems...