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Weep Not For Withered Petals-Repost

Each day another velvet petal fell Like somber tears from weeping eyes A perfect flower was severed to quell It lay withering as it drooped and died Perfect flower, from bud to bloom Sweet-scented rose, it was no wonder That stifled in that sepulcher room You were enshrined, awaiting plunder Sadness lingers in me over your demise Withered petals are always a cause for pain But I'll remember you without tears in my eyes The memory of your fragrance shall remain ~ Reposted from 2015 ~

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Date: 12/21/2021 6:37:00 AM
Such beauty is taken away serves as a warning that death has no preferences. Your poems are primarily of excellent quality. For us to be awakened of truth in this crumbling environment in which we find ourselves
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/8/2022 1:19:00 AM
It pains me to watch them wither. Much better to enjoy them on the stem, vine, etc. Thanks, Lasaad.
Date: 12/19/2021 1:39:00 PM
Your repost glows in beautiful sadness. That such beauty dies, is a reminder that death shows no favorites. Always exceptional verses you weave. That we may be reminded of reality in this decaying world that we inhabit. A fav.. God bless....
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Date: 10/8/2022 1:18:00 AM
Thank you very much, Robert.
Date: 12/19/2021 8:55:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this outstanding write Lin! That too resurrected from 2015! A beauty!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/19/2021 10:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, Seeker. From the lack of comments for an oldie, I appreciate you for reading and leaving such great remarks.

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