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Weekend Getaway

Wading in a branch trickling slowly along to the ocean. Smell of decaying leaves and honeysuckle in the air. Tadpoles, crawfish swimming by toes in Swift creek. River otter curiously watching the boys playing, splashing in the water on a hot August day. Bream jumping, splashing Trying to remove the land creatures From their watery domain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/21/2009 10:25:00 AM
Sounds so idylic Doris>>James
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Date: 8/14/2009 10:07:00 AM
Good job of describing our habitat. Keep writing. Mom
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