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Week Old Muffins

Had visitors today, a couple of long lost cousins
Had no idea the visit would have such repercussions
A reminder of my childhood
When the world was new and good
But now the world is like, a dozen week old muffins

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/8/2017 11:10:00 AM

OLD MUFFIN PUDDING CAn't fit the recipe on here. Too bad I just invented it for your old muffins. LOL Your poem made my head strange.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/8/2017 1:41:00 PM

I really did invent a recipe this afternoon. Do you cook? Food the is.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/8/2017 11:26:00 AM

Sorry about the strange head!!! Better stay away coz it ain't gonna get better! No no no... didn't mean that! It is always exhilarating to see your name!!! lol Love, Jackson xxx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 8/1/2017 8:29:00 AM

Crusty... ;)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/1/2017 5:30:00 PM

Yup, was on my bike for the first car, hit two...Helmets work! :) came to a week later in traction, thus the poem "Ham". Extra lust for life after that; my taste buds even opened up.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/1/2017 1:55:00 PM

WOW! We're two pods in a pea??? or something like that!!! You are right Miss Mo... life is beautiful! How did you break your bones... accident??? xxx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/1/2017 10:15:00 AM

Well, after breaking half my bones and 20yrs hard labour, I feel like I should, but an optimist till the end cuz life IS beautiful :) To quote Captain Jean Luc Picard, "Make it so"!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/1/2017 8:34:00 AM

YUP!!! But it's the best life I've ever had... how about you dear Mo??? Lovesies, Jacko! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/1/2017 8:28:00 AM

I'll bet you had a kissing cousin//when you were young — or a dozen?//Kissed one myself//when I was an elf//Man, was my head a buzzin! CUSS ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/1/2017 8:36:00 AM

My head has been a-buzzin' more than once in my advanced years! YEE HAW!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/1/2017 7:23:00 AM

Certainly it wasn't that bad my friend! Did ya eat the muffins anyway? Not something I would recommend! As your dr. I say you need more potassium in your diet, ha! I surely loved this stunning poem! It was fascinating to read Jack, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/1/2017 7:27:00 AM

It's only a silly poem... the world is my oyster! Actually, I have never eaten oysters in my 82 years and don't intend to EVER!!! LOL