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Wee Prick

deranged snapshots of reality
full-moon's analytical quagmires
conceptualizing archetypes, 
creating art of duplications
venturing prickled duplicity,
slapped me bout sideways
insinuated tacklin' romance, 
uncompromising twist since
you thought me a maniacal *****
took a spin on the wily horizons
landed horizontal 'tween thighs
'twas a wee prick of somethin'
naught patter of heartbeats,
whitewashed the lunacy 
off my derriere & cleavage
attempting to forget the 
writing on the cosmos
when it beckoned me to 
your teensy universe

Copyright © Paloma P | Year Posted 2016

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Lim'Rik Flats Date: 12/20/2016 8:33:00 AM It's a small world, after all... (apolojeez to Walt) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/23/2016 5:50:00 PM oh my, you TELL 'im, woman!!! Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 11/23/2016 11:08:00 AM Chuckling :) Gay guys get it ;) Login to Reply

Probir Gupta Date: 11/23/2016 5:31:00 AM Meaning or no meaning, enigmatically beautiful ... Login to Reply

Jannie Breedt Date: 11/23/2016 12:34:00 AM Oh Paloma, you keep out writing everyone Your use of innuendo mixed in with the phletora of grammar and vocabulary throws me in the ditch. Getting a comment from you is like opening a present. Wondering what the "P" stands for? Perhaps Picasso? Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 11/22/2016 7:29:00 PM For some reason I could not get past the whitewashed derriere and cleavage. Lol Oh well, as they say, if the small shoe fits... I wear size 13, in case your wondering. All of you women are liars, saying size doesn't matter. Who are you trying to convince? This is laugh out loud funny, Paloma:) Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 11/22/2016 7:32:00 PM I'm guessing, the rendezvous was unproductive:)

Chris Green Date: 11/22/2016 5:21:00 PM Ha, that last line is killer. When I saw the title I thought, "Phew, at least this one isn't about me". :) This was as funny as it is crazy good. You have a erected a damn good, albeit short poem here Paloma. Wow, Pee Wee's Playhouse takes on a entirely new meaning now. This was fantastic. Oh and the validation code for this comment is 3in...not sure what that means. :) Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/22/2016 5:27:00 PM Give that man a prize! Aren't you the brave soul Chris? Ha, laughing @ 'it's not about you' ;) I don't know what it means either, but I won't venture a guess, I'm in enough hot water with the guys as it is!