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Wedding Tradition

Wedding tradition of carrying the bride over the threshold He wheezed and gasped, his body bathed in sweat, Remembered months of training at the gym - And strained again, he wasn’t beaten yet... She eyed the threshold, sighed - and carried him!

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Elaine George

Date: 4/8/2011 5:14:00 AM

lol! Good one, Jack. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 4/6/2011 7:21:00 PM

Great job Jack. Tell me about it! Great to see your success in Francine's cute contest. Nice take on the picture, Haaaaaa! Congratulations on your worthy Hm place. Lol, Agape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/6/2011 7:20:00 PM

Just to cute. congrats on this different look at the pic..one of my favorites. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/6/2011 2:10:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your HM in Francine's contest with this unique write luv.. excellent my friend.. enjoy a special honor all your own luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/6/2011 11:52:00 AM

Really funny. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/6/2011 11:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jack in Francine Roberts contest "Tell me about it. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/6/2011 11:20:00 AM

too funny Jack, love it, congrats on your HM in the contest

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/27/2011 12:03:00 PM

Lol Jack, thanks for the laughter tonight ;)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2011 12:05:00 PM

LOL This is exactly what I did -- carried John over the threshold. He had too much to drink at the wedding and there was a blizzard so it was the safest way to get him inside. You brought back great memories with this delightful poem, Jack! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2011 7:41:00 AM

hahahaha. THIS one is GOOD!!! and right there, she started a new tradition.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/25/2011 1:41:00 PM

hahahahaha.. Jack this is funny and cute luv.. could just picture this scene .. wonderful humor my friend..luv..