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"Wedding Dress"
Innocence betrayed a white page divesting romantic notions of a pristine life marked by sibilant soft-tongued seduction green apple plucked wrapping serpentine legs like vines rosy cheeked blushing a student smarting around Garden of Arden's Puck captured essence from a torn portrait of picket fences climbing soft caresses towards the wild bee's stinging under the tightly stitched waiting room of a hemmed in wedding dress (LadyLabyrinth / 2020)
"Earned It", The Weeknd https://youtu.be/CtyytBCHA9U
"Crazy in Love", Hannah Rue https://youtu.be/fO4OkwNEid0
"To drench your skin with lover's rosy stain. A chance to find a phoenix for the flame, A chance to die, but can we Dance into the fire, That fatal kiss is all we need. Dance into the fire To fatal sounds of broken dreams. Dance into the fire; That fatal kiss is all we need Dance into the fire When all we see is a view to a kill"

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Date: 8/30/2020 11:20:00 AM
I love wedding dresses. Even a blossom under closer inspection, is just a cluster cells. So I analyze less, and enjoy more. More fatal not to have it I have learned. As usually, never disappointed with your writing. Have a great day my friend!
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/30/2020 2:13:00 PM
I had a moment.
Date: 8/27/2020 12:08:00 AM
https://youtu.be/z3KwI1GDNxw
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Date: 8/26/2020 11:54:00 PM
Dance?
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/26/2020 11:54:00 PM
https://youtu.be/L5V9nK7-OkM
Date: 8/26/2020 1:56:00 PM
A white wedding dress Made out of fig leaves to hide the bride's blushes Plentiful cryptic imagery to digest within this poem Leanne
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 8/27/2020 12:37:00 PM
Lol Leanne I'm a celebrity get me out of here. Do you get that over there its filmed in Australia bud
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/26/2020 6:38:00 PM
lol...regards, The Jungle....x
Date: 8/16/2020 3:41:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_authoress_-_the_author_1134904
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Date: 8/16/2020 3:21:00 PM
xx...https://youtu.be/AAZQaYKZMTI
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/16/2020 3:34:00 PM
bang bang ... https://youtu.be/pCfRPT904uE
Date: 8/15/2020 10:35:00 PM
Wedding Dress/Lanegan.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/15/2020 10:35:00 PM
https://youtu.be/FX9ccqQuzO4
Date: 8/15/2020 10:29:00 PM
Crazy.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/15/2020 10:29:00 PM
https://youtu.be/fO4OkwNEid0
Date: 8/15/2020 10:19:00 PM
This could be heaven, or this could be hell...
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/15/2020 10:19:00 PM
https://youtu.be/vcmjDPDOk7c
Date: 8/15/2020 10:14:00 PM
Shotgun.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/15/2020 10:14:00 PM
https://youtu.be/pmSHlutX1xo
Date: 8/15/2020 10:11:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/50_words_for_poe_st_john_1128620
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/15/2020 10:13:00 PM
Billy Idol's White Wedding comes to mind...
Date: 8/15/2020 6:39:00 PM
Gorgeous write, that makes the wedding dress memories come back full force.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/15/2020 10:06:00 PM
You're such a romantic Krutsinger. Love it. I kind of fell in love with the song first. x