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Wedding Day Or If Someone Had Only Told Me

He stopped his father in the drive put his hand on his fathers arm "I'm not sure" he started to say "this marriage is for me" His father looked him over - this son this youngest of all his children the sweetest brightest one of all about to ruin his life "Dont then" he said "stop it now, or you'll bring children you can't abide. Resentment will ruin everything that you are inside. She'll deny you love she'll poision your soul She's a blood sucking ***** from hell no one's going to tell you no one's going to say that not one of us can stand her she's really in the way." Then the light snapped on. Wedding day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/1/2011 2:51:00 PM
Love is blind? Congrats on the selection. daver
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Veronica Joseph
Date: 11/1/2011 7:23:00 PM
thank you - sometimes when its not love, one is afraid to back out...
Date: 10/31/2011 4:47:00 PM
Veronica, Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. take care and have yourself a safe and fun Halloween night,..p.d.
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Veronica Joseph
Date: 11/1/2011 7:24:00 PM
thanks.....so much!
Date: 10/31/2011 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserving poetry being featured this week Veronica. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2011 9:49:00 AM
Congrats Veronica on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful write to share with luv..
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Veronica Joseph
Date: 11/1/2011 7:23:00 PM
thank you....!
Date: 4/8/2009 6:49:00 AM
Painful, and yet so true so much of the time - family and friends make the "mistake" of keeping their distance when sometimes a loved one just needs someone to speak the truth they already know. Thank you for your comments.
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Date: 4/8/2009 4:55:00 AM
Horrible manifestations ... a fantastic reality poem, great dramatic conclusion ... this a good poem serving bitter lessons of pain. Love and resolution
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