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Wedding Bouquet

it was a
glorious sunny day
a day I would never forget

I waited till the flower shop opened
I was their first customer that morning

perfumes were rich and magnificent
I knew exactly what I came in to get

a few exquisite long stemmed roses
and the color had to be just right

peach on the side of salmon rosé
coral with the blush of tangerine
apricot with a hue of orangina

here there they were
and they were mine

my heart was
elated



AP: 3rd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on March 11, 2021 for contest  FLOWER OR FLOWERS IN IMAGISM FORM sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE  -  RANKED 1ST
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La France Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 9:24 AM
Line, congratulation on your win in my Imagism challenge on the theme of a flower or flowers with your beautifully penned poem and I love your image also, well done _Constance
Gauthier Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 9:02 PM
Thank you very much, Constance ~ most appreciated
Schiavina Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations Line on your very beautiful winning poem. So well written capturing the fragrance and joyful sunshine colors of roses well matched to warmth of love
Gauthier Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 9:02 PM
Thank you, Frances. Much appreciated ~
Roper Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 11:01 PM
Great verse, Line, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 4:55 AM
Thank you very much, Eve ~
Andresen Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 3:14 AM
- Beautiful bouquet, Line ... these roses in this color were my mother's favorite - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 6:49 AM
Thank you, Sunshine ~
Devonshire Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 3:33 PM
We call these "tea roses" here, Line, and few flowers can match their beauty. You describe their blending colors perfectly. Congratulations on your top win! Hugs, Carolyn
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 6:08 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Carolyn ~
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 3:04 PM
simply gorgeous Line too adore those subtle shades:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs JAN XX
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 6:09 PM
Thank you, Jan ~ much appreciated
Fenn Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 6:05 PM
What a beautiful bouquet, both in the picture and in the poem! Glad it was perfect for your wedding day. Congratulations! Good luck in the contest Line!
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 6:30 PM
Thank you so much, Jennifer ~
Gilmour Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 11:24 AM
Wow I love this Line, so beautifully romantic and I adore your wonderful poetic imagery as you describe the exact colour of those fabulous roses ~ good luck in the contest ~ a FAVE for me. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 6:30 PM
Thanks for the lovely compliment, Ann. Most appreciated ~
Wolf Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 6:00 PM
Beautiful tale that touches the poetic heart, Line. Peaches and Cream, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 6:05 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon ~
Krutsinger Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 1:40 PM
So beautiful. It is wonderful that you were able to get exactly what you had imagined!
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 6:05 PM
Thanks, Caren ~
Bauer Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 1:10 PM
a beautiful memory, lovingly penned, line...
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Thank you so much, Ilene ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 12:05 PM
Hello Lin, It sounds like you found the perfect flowers. Hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 11:20 AM
You are welcome Lin, enjoy your day my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Thanks, Darlene ~
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