Wed Lock

WEDLOCK Wedlock! Romantic aroma! Loved each other! Honored! Adored! Happy couple! Wedlock! Mutual commitment! Deep devotion! Tingling passion? Perfect bride- groom! Wedlock! Feeling secured? Relieved? Safe dependence! Imprisoned? Got life sentence? 10/21/15 Minute Poem containing three stanzas each in four lines with syllable counts as 8,4,4,4 ; 8,4,4,4 ; 8,4,4,4 ; New or Old poems Contest -4

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/5/2016 4:29:00 PM

I especially loved the final stanza Anisha :-):-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/21/2015 10:09:00 AM

This is a well done poem but unfortunately it doesn't follow the form. I still enjoyed reading it. Please write another one and resubmit to my contest.