Web of Platinum

My eyes are platinum, an abyss
They reflect the midday sky, a blue relic
I blink back molten metal tears

These garments are loose bleeding petals
They hang like rolls of skin, peeling and shedding
Billowing and sagging a Gothic shape

Black and bright this sight of mine
Shimmering like veils of flaming satin
A glazed, mirrory gleam of invisibility

What of these nerve coils?
This case of absolute lambaste
I haven't a qualm of the raven's hallmark

I alight, steadfast and amiable
Blinking my eyes of evanescing quarters
Upon the ghastly faltering rip tide of Atlantis

A trick, a favorable fancy, a visionary swarming with ivory
It knocked me faint with copious screams
A miracle!  It would have killed me!

What sort of jungle gutter has exploded over there?
Unstrung jellyfish kissed by acetylene
Fossils of shame, their death was delicate

I am too pure for this me-lieu
The last Victorian league
A grandiose comet trailing innards of ancient origins

Berries rot under the summer's tombstone
Buried under scant reeds, skinny and dusty
Our folk are braced for eelish lichens

Perfectly violent, shopworn and blemished
Til the pique of all furor does daunt and amaze
The gift of something beautiful, luxurious and annihilating

Where is my well-wisher, the paragon saint?
I've been hoodwinked by the moon-eyes sleuth!
Your death, oh gracious! I'll see it burnt and blood-splattered

I'll remember the Albatross of Atlantis
Home of the Arcadian Devil, tongueless and flimsy
A world of blue vol-ted days in a nostalgic geranium universe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 9/20/2009 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/15/2009 8:04:00 PM
Carrie - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 9/15/2009 1:31:00 AM
Carrie, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
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Date: 9/14/2009 8:08:00 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem; your poem speaks for itself. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/12/2009 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Carrie. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:12:00 PM
Carrie, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 9/19/2008 11:13:00 PM
Full of metallic and ancient imageries. A tableau of imagination. I didn't understand it but i liked it. hehehe.
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