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Weave

"The mind can weave itself warmly in the cocoon of its own thoughts, and dwell a hermit anywhere." ~ James Russell Lowell "As weavers, we weave. As spinners, we spin. And somewhere, in the loom's blur, Our poems begin." ~ Sudeep Pagedar "Weave, weave the sunlight in your hair-." ~ T. S. Eliot Weave into my dreams, a tapestry of magic, Of heart's deepest emotions, cheerful or tragic; Weave into my poems, soft tunes that once were lost, Of fallen leaves, waltzing breeze and winter's white frost; Weave into my hair, the glitter of sunrays bright, Of dappled shadows, moonlit skies and starry nights; Weave into my life, the threads of love and romance, Of passion's sweet nectar, ardour's unending dance; Weave into my heart, twirls of happiness and joy, Of everlasting pleasures that none can destroy; Weave into my being, the essence of your thoughts, Of that luminous painting from untangled knots; Weave into my soul, strands of fantasies and songs, Of desires and unreached heights where this girl belongs.
23rd April 2023 For Constance La France's "Writing Challenge - 'W' words" contest

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Date: 4/28/2023 5:30:00 PM
You have woven a beautiful poem Jo, Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/27/2023 12:03:00 PM
Jo, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge and I love the quotes too, congratulations !
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Date: 4/27/2023 8:27:00 AM
Hi Jo, Good poem and quote. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/27/2023 6:44:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jo :) - hugs
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Date: 4/27/2023 3:57:00 AM
A very luring work found here on the winner's list. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 4/26/2023 8:39:00 PM
"Weave into..." - Beautifully written expressing earnest emotions. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/26/2023 7:06:00 PM
Joanna, well done again and again. Congratulations on your great win in the Contest.
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Date: 4/26/2023 5:33:00 PM
This is a fantastic poem. Your thorough metaphor selection and perfect diction add another level of refinement to the outstanding verse you've crafted. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/26/2023 2:09:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your  "weave"  again. Lovely...  Have a great/blessed day.............
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Date: 4/25/2023 6:27:00 AM
I love this Jo. Your shuttle was busy with this piece, and in a delightful pattern! Best wishes! :)
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Date: 4/24/2023 5:56:00 PM
Your weaving has caused a beautiful tapestry of love and resplendence love it :)
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Date: 4/24/2023 1:42:00 AM
You weave a stupendous poem.
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Date: 4/24/2023 12:11:00 AM
Beautiful couplets full of wishful longings. "Weave into my heart, twirls of happiness and joy, Of everlasting pleasures that none can destroy;". I love this couplet. All the Best Joanna.
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Date: 4/23/2023 11:24:00 AM
- Your couplets are all unique ... beautifully and touchingly described, Jo :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/23/2023 10:45:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one. A very unique creative work. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 4/23/2023 9:47:00 AM
Your "Weave" is a lovely write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 4/23/2023 7:43:00 AM
Weave is the one word that spoke to me too . I hope i can do it justice as you so wonderfully did
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