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Weathering the Storm (Lune)

The weathered nest swayed in tree top battered by the wind [ Poet' View: The lune is an American form of poetry similar to the haiku. It has thirteen syllables; there are two variations it can be written in the format of 3/5/3 or 5/3/5 syllable counts. ]

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Date: 11/30/2010 8:58:00 AM
Enjoyed the descriptive and expressive work in this one..I am glad that I chose it to read this morn..I was delighted that you found a line that caught your attention in my work..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2008 5:10:00 AM
Strong imagery here Adell. Very interesting poetry form you made great use of. Love, Shar
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