Weathered

the oaks algae dust corpulent in weathered green clouds threaten to bust 1/15/2020

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Sandra Adams

Date: 1/17/2020 7:11:00 PM

oh i can see this one... thankfully winter has slowed the allergy season around here a bit... good write Kim... wonderful imagery! :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2020 3:46:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/17/2020 4:11:00 PM

Gorgeous write, Kim. Exactly right!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2020 3:46:00 PM

Thank you! You are so mind, Caren!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2020 8:48:00 PM

love this image. Also the rhyme!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2020 9:12:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/15/2020 9:26:00 PM

A vivid picture you've sketched, Kim. Perfect. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2020 9:11:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/15/2020 1:42:00 PM

Hello Kim,the oaks and the greens are waiting for the rain. have a nice day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2020 9:11:00 PM

Today the sun shone after so many days of rain.

Chris Green

Date: 1/15/2020 11:38:00 AM

I think they have already busted open down here...allergies are running rampant. Nice one Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2020 9:10:00 PM

Thankfully no problem here!