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weathered oak branches shiver against gusts of wind ~ appear first snowflakes AP: 1st place 2021, Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on November 4, 2019 for contest A LATE FALL OR EARLY WINTER HAIKU sponsored by TANIA KITCHIN – RANKED 3RD

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Date: 11/13/2019 9:34:00 AM
Line, hearty congrats for your well-deserved win for this beauty! Always a delight to see your name on the winners list. Thank you for your kind words re my entry - Bob
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Date: 11/13/2019 9:47:00 AM
Thanks, Bob, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 11/11/2019 4:05:00 PM
very nice Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/11/2019 4:18:00 PM
Thanks, Timothy.
Date: 11/10/2019 8:16:00 PM
Shiver me timbers, Line! Brrrr. I think those are what we call 'Frosted Flakes' here in Chicago. LOL. Congrats on your win in the contest! :) gw
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Date: 11/10/2019 9:29:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated. Brrr. LOL
Date: 11/9/2019 9:53:00 AM
I'm with Jan, you made me shiver, Line! Congrats on your podium finish. ~Mark
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:17:00 PM
Thanks, Mark. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/9/2019 1:18:00 AM
ooh you made me shiver Line, lovely imagery i really like this poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2019 8:50:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/8/2019 8:13:00 AM
Brrr! Can feel this haiku. Great write! Congrats on your win Line, xomo
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Date: 11/8/2019 9:22:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/8/2019 5:12:00 AM
A beautiful autumn shiver and nakedness. Congrats, Line.
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Date: 11/8/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thanks, Kurt. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/8/2019 4:57:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win, Line :) - We have already "tasted" the snow - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2019 9:24:00 AM
Had a mini flurry here too. It's pretty especially when you don't need to go out. LOL
Date: 11/7/2019 10:37:00 PM
I'm zipping up my imaginary coat Line! Well done.
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Date: 11/7/2019 11:07:00 PM
Brrr. Thanks for your visit and comment, Jean.
Date: 11/7/2019 7:53:00 PM
you captured the essence of that late fall, Line, Congrats for the win
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Date: 11/7/2019 8:19:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/7/2019 7:48:00 PM
Congratulations Line on your winning placement in the contest with your lovely haiku, thanks for participating!
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Date: 11/7/2019 8:19:00 PM
Thanks, Tania. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/7/2019 7:37:00 PM
Very picturesque Line. Very nice haiku! Congrats on your win in Tania's contest. ~Charlie
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Date: 11/7/2019 8:20:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/4/2019 7:42:00 PM
Yup! A perfect, timeless seasonal snapshot--- just the way a great haiku is supposed to be! Bravo, Line. ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/4/2019 7:51:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/4/2019 11:59:00 AM
Maple on pancakes on a snow covered day.......
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Date: 11/4/2019 6:37:00 PM
Yummy comment, Paula.

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