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Weather Report

weather report sun is lost again air is drab, too close, perfect affectation to play across the landscape of my muffled mind. many days have begun and/or ended this way. neighbours send up fire crackers to placate god break up the celestial portents. explosion, fire, reveals the bland face of cloud which blocks our visions. neither wizard nor rain maker needed. we end with a calamitous whimper.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/22/2017 6:52:00 AM
I very much enjoyed reading this illustrious write of yours this morning my friend! This was a fabulous and incredible poem, so full of metaphors that I was in awe of the wonders! You have delighted me by your skillful words within this creative piece, Great Work!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/22/2017 10:46:00 AM
Thank you Russell. It is very good of you to stop by and read and comment. I look forward to your take on my words.

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