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Weather Forecasting

weightless astronauts... they've brain and body problems... no sense of balance... there's information... but input contradictions... so...computers... native peoples brains... same as ours...but for knowledge... we have weather men... they do not need them... bodies react to weather... and the surroundings... that information... the input into our brains... is generalized... changes cause headaches... and other body symptoms... just weather response... we go to doctors... doctors blame stress and tension... but brains are plastic... so get out and walk... exercise your gray matter... get off all those pills... stan sand

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Date: 12/22/2018 12:40:00 AM
Yes we need fresh air exercise yeah. This is a great sublime poem , superb to read. Kudos. Pleez do comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 12/22/2018 1:17:00 AM
thank you...to stretch the limits is to value comment
Date: 12/21/2018 8:44:00 PM
Don't claim to understand all of this poem but there is truth in it. Weather, good or bad, does have an effect on the body and therefore the mind. I read an article once that claimed people who live indoors with little little develop a vitamin D deficiency, in turn unhealthy symptoms. Sun and exercise are the antidotes. Thanks for the stop by, sand blown. / M
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Date: 12/21/2018 11:22:00 PM
thank you Maurice for the comment...weightless astronauts was an example where-in the human brain is less trustworthy than a computer program...and even then computers make errors : /

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