Notes About The Poem

Weather Forecast

For the new year, my weather forecast shows
     good outlook for improvement on my front,
          'cause models for disturbance have disclosed
the changes in my atmosphere- less blunt.

Precipitation of my built-up tears,
     held in by clouds to later fall like rain,
          reveals that charts predict revised frontiers;
climatic stats project my drier reign.

My temperatures- stabled to stay fair,
     and UV index low to prevent burns.
          Statistics show no earthquakes to declare;
flash floods adjusted now show low returns.

Extended-outlook for your year is great;
          no storms and brighter rainbows I'll create.


January 6, 2018

Contest: You're A Weather Forecaster
Sponsor: Matt Caliri
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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La France Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Sandra, a wonderful poem for the theme of the contest, hopefully you can use it in another contest
Haight Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Thank you so much, Constance, for stopping by with your uplifting comment. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Carmack Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 1:07 PM
Unfortunate that you forgot to enter this in the contest. Considering what Viv said, a congrats is still in order.
Haight Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Thank you so much, Rob, for your very supportive comment and congrats! Sandra :)
Delaney Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Well done, Sandra: Cleverly written and entertaining. GL in the contest.
Haight Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Thank you, Suzanne, for your visit and lovely comment! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 7:47 PM
Wow Sandra, I don't think I could even attempt this! You did a beautiful job on this entry and I will bet it rates high! Brava! : )
Haight Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Hi, Connie. Thanks so much for your kind and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
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