Paulette Calasibetta Poet Pleiades

Weather

Winter's budding branches
                                      Wrestling Leo in the wind
                                      Whistle at early blooms;
                                      Watchful Hawks soar the sky
                                      Wading birds pose pensive
                                      Wistful Aries arrives






  Date: March 5, 2022
  For: Brian Strand Form Poetry Contest
  Sponsored by: Brian Strand
  Placed 1st in contest

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Caren Krutsinger March 7, 2022 at 10:51 AM Congratulations! I have never tried one of these, but you make me want to. Paulette Calasibetta March 7, 2022 at 3:40 PM This is my second attempt at this form~it's quite a challenge but lots of fun! Try it! :)Paulette

James Marshall Goff March 5, 2022 at 5:54 PM Congrats Paulette! wistful twists! Paulette Calasibetta March 7, 2022 at 3:39 PM As always Jim, I appreciate your kind support as I continue to become more comfortable here on Poetry Soup. :)Paulette

Debra L Brown March 5, 2022 at 4:59 PM Congratulation on your win in Brian's Contest. I enjoyed your poem. Blessings ~ Debra Paulette Calasibetta March 5, 2022 at 5:14 PM Thanks Debra ~ glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Michelle Faulkner March 5, 2022 at 8:36 AM Very original, Paulette, I like the 'watchful hawks' and 'wading birds' and how you weave in Leo and Aries, very spring like! Paulette Calasibetta March 5, 2022 at 9:05 AM Thanks Michelle~Inspired by the old adage: March comes in like a Lion and goes out like a Lamb~was fun to write. Hope you are enjoying a lovely week-end. :)Paulette