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We can never be sure What the forecast will bring Whether we’ll need brollies When faced with showers or Will it be lovely and Warm enough to sunbathe With wall to wall sunshine 6,6,6,6,6,6,6 checked with HMS Pleiades W Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman 05/09/21

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/18/2021 2:34:00 AM

Brilliant once again, congrats, Jan:)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/14/2021 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun write about our ever changing weather. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Eve Roper

Date: 5/13/2021 8:44:00 PM

Great flow in your verse, Jan, congratulations on Kim's Pleiades "W" win. Hugs Eve

Joseph May

Date: 5/11/2021 7:35:00 PM

Never know when that downpour will come, Congrats on your win Jan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2021 1:24:00 PM

so true, jan. Congrats on a marvelous win.

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/11/2021 1:16:00 PM

Jan, I like your emphasis on the unpredictability of the weather! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 5/11/2021 1:15:00 PM

Dear Jan, Congratulations on your fine win for a fun Pleiades! Carol Louise

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2021 12:21:00 PM

- Congratulations ... well deserved, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janis Thompson

Date: 5/11/2021 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations Jan. Good job and we never know "weather"

Terry Flood

Date: 5/11/2021 11:20:00 AM

Congrats on your top spot, Jan. Terry.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/11/2021 8:40:00 AM

Hi Jan, congratulations on your top win; you deserve it with this gem pleiades Regards and hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/10/2021 1:56:00 AM

In the past I would have suggested May as a lovely vacation. No longer.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/9/2021 11:20:00 PM

Hello Jan ... Melbourne is well known as being the city with four seasons in one day so we must be wary of the weather. A verse we can certainly all relate to - thanks again Jan - Lindsay

Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/10/2021 11:23:00 AM

So is Worms, Germany, but the worms win every time!

Terry Flood

Date: 5/9/2021 5:25:00 PM

Hey Jan. When I worked in London’s west end there was a guy who sold umbrellas from a makeshift stand. When it was hot and sunny he turned his cardboard sign around to read ‘Parasoles’. Good luck in the contest. Terry

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 5/9/2021 4:49:00 PM

We do unfortunately Jan Never leave home without an umbrella even on a sunny day without a cloud in the sky and an all clear weather forecast

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/9/2021 4:02:00 PM

wonderful, jan! i especially love "wall to wall sunshine!"

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/9/2021 3:46:00 PM

This is so good! The rhythm flows smoothly! A sure win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/9/2021 12:27:00 PM

- It's true, "We can never be sure" ... on my calendar it says spring ... but feels like winter ... - Best wishes in the contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/9/2021 11:44:00 AM

Hello Jan, right you are. I feel that the weatherman does not always get the weather facts right. When he says it will rain we have sunshine. Or we have rain. I say the weather man needs a window to see if he got the weather right. Hugs Darlene. Happy Mother's Day.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/9/2021 11:36:00 AM

Clever girl! Well done, but: We need to wee! Where? Aloha! Rico

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/9/2021 8:25:00 AM

Your right there Jan, our weather is so unpredictable, always have a brolly in the car just in case. You composed this pleiades well using W. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 5/9/2021 11:09:00 AM

thanks so much Tom we seem to be getting 4 seasons in one day at the moment with storms and hail and rain and sun... typical bank holiday weather lol:-) hugs Jan xx