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Weak Spots Xxiii

The pretty cast of sorrow— Hollow, yet comforting, When damasked on those lips, Or teased upon that fake smile I see such sorrow inside of her And weep inwardly, For I love her gazes And hate her mazes Paler now is the face And love it more I must, For the moment I express disgust, She is gone like rain Leaving guilt on trickling rooftops Hollow company— Is still company, And that is why I still love her— Somehow her smile is real 2.23.20

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Date: 1/12/2021 11:26:00 AM
That's deep...I love the conflicted love on your lips Poestess.. Where I come from we call these feelings, along with the pain and the joy, a love battle...this poem is Fire...Justin...A FAV!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/13/2021 4:01:00 AM
I hesitated to call this a romantic piece until I realized actually just how romantic curses of the self can truly be.. I like that, a love battle.. You've always been a perceptive reader Justin..thank you.. ~Laura

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