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While your name is being traced beside mine, as I speak,

your words seem to take shape and then rearrange my breathing.

The second I am lost in the maze that is you, eagerly searching,

the wind finds your whisper of, “I Need You” … and I become weak.

~ A romantic scribble ~

Longing for your touch

Sunday December 19th, 2021- Poem of the Week

Weak

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While your name is being traced beside mine, as I speak,
your words seem to take shape and then rearrange my breathing.
The second I am lost in the maze that is you, eagerly searching,
the wind finds your whisper of, “I Need You” … and I become weak.


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Longing for your touch 
~A romantic scribble ~


Sunday December 19th, 2021- Poem of the Week

Copyright © Brandy Nicole | Year Posted 2021

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October 7, 2023 at 10:36 PM

It is amazing how the right words from the right person can instantly drop our defences. Words have power. This poem illustrates that with such beauty, Brandy ;))

October 8, 2023 at 4:27 PM

You're exactly right, Sam. As the heart holds many emotions within, the thought of being needed seems to be linger after being loved. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

January 21, 2023 at 12:52 AM

"The second I am lost in the maze that is you, eagerly searching" Though this is full of powerfully romantic vibes that is by far my favorite! The conclusion was absolutely amazing and left me weak. My favorite poem so far and that says something because I adore your mind. You see my work, I am obsessed with sexual undertones and romance! Much love Asavvy1

January 21, 2023 at 2:32 PM

There is power and depth in this statement. Searching your maze, being lost to the point that you become weak. Romance is always in style and I enjoy writing about that emotion. I'm blushing with you saying you adore my mind. Thank you, Jared. Your thoughts leave me in awe. Yes, I've noticed the sensual tone to your poetry. You are an artist with your words. My best to you. :) Brandy

April 29, 2022 at 9:46 AM

Potw from emotive; write not weak.' Great lines here Brandy.)

April 29, 2022 at 6:56 PM

Thank you, Joe. I appreciate your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

April 26, 2022 at 9:25 PM

Oh my, the feelings are so beautifully expressed, the last line I become weak is phenomenal... Silpika

April 27, 2022 at 8:14 PM

To be swept away in such a moment, is truly breathtaking. Thank you, Silpika. You and your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

April 18, 2022 at 4:22 PM

i love romance, i am an intellectual monster refugee and the delight in this is the last line that draws it all in....remember, 9/11 all the phone calls from those planes, none were hate, revenge, or some poet's line....all were simply about Love...looking forward to more

April 19, 2022 at 5:46 PM

I can tell you are a romantic. Thank you, Timothy. Your thoughts hold so much truth. Many should reflect on that day more often. Love is a powerful emotion indeed. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Brandy

March 21, 2022 at 7:22 AM

'I need you' these words r very strong to make weak not only in opposite genders but also in every relationship between human. Impressive well done

March 21, 2022 at 8:07 PM

Yes, those three words can certainly make you feel "weak." To be needed is a wonderful feeling indeed. Thank you, Arjun. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy

February 21, 2022 at 10:21 AM

We all need someone we can count on, someone who will always be there for us in our time of need.. love the subtleness of your poem..

February 21, 2022 at 7:40 PM

Yes, we do. It's such a wonderful feeling, when someone is that close. Thank you, Silent One. My best to you. :) Brandy

February 19, 2022 at 4:28 PM

Hello Brandy ... nice verse filled with romance and desire - thank you Brandy - Lindsay

February 19, 2022 at 8:32 PM

Lindsay, your kind words are greatly appreciated. Thank you for the lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

January 8, 2022 at 9:51 PM

As always my dear friend your scribble has an ocean of meaning - i can say, without reservation that you are amongst our greatest of poets on Poetry Soup. A wonderful year ahead of love, joy and health I hope come your way, and Gods richest blessings, Hugs, Jennifer. Jennifer.

January 10, 2022 at 8:39 PM

Jennifer, your lovely comment brings a smile to my heart. Such a wonderful thing to say about me and my poetry. I am humbled. Your kind words are greatly appreciated, my sweet friend. May wonderful blessings to you, in 2022. :) Hugs, Brandy

December 31, 2021 at 9:46 AM

Very nice Brandy. Sweet :)

December 31, 2021 at 12:23 PM

Thank you, Heidi. You are so kind. Many wonderful blessings to you. Happy New Year. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

December 25, 2021 at 10:49 PM

a beautiful romantic scribble indeed. and here to say congrats on POTW. wow

December 27, 2021 at 7:40 PM

Awe.. thank you, Andrea. I appreciate you. Your lovely comment makes my heart smile. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

December 25, 2021 at 8:41 AM

Back again with congratulations on POTW,, with this beautiful verse. Merry Christmas sweet friend.

December 25, 2021 at 7:29 PM

Dear Eve, so sweet of you to come back and read this again. I'm smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Regina Mcintosh

December 24, 2021 at 7:14 AM

Lovely writing... beautiful. Congrats on POTW. God bless you and Merry Christmas. Love, Gina

December 24, 2021 at 7:00 PM

Dear Regina, your kind words and congratulations are appreciated. Such a wonderful comment, my sweet friend. Merry Christmas. :) Hugs, Brandy

L Milton Hankins

December 23, 2021 at 7:10 PM

Lovely writing, Brandy. Congratulations on your P.O.T.W.

December 23, 2021 at 7:32 PM

Dear Milton, thank you for your kind words and congratulations. My best to you. Merry Christmas. :) Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell

December 23, 2021 at 12:25 PM

Lovely romantic piece Brandy, with such delicate wording being so sweet a pen. Blessings always,Gordon

December 23, 2021 at 7:30 PM

Dear Gordon, your thoughts are so beautiful and tender. Thank you for the lovely compliment. Many wonderful blessings to you. Merry Christmas. :) Brandy

Charles Messina

December 23, 2021 at 5:23 AM

This is so touching, Brandy. I became weak just reading it. So beautifully written. Belated Congratulations on POTW. Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and a Happy & Healthy New Year. Sending love...Charlie

December 23, 2021 at 7:23 PM

Dear Charlie, my heart smiles with you saying you became weak, after reading this scribble of mine. Your kind words and congratulations are appreciated. Merry Christmas to you too and Happy New Year. :) Hugs and love, Brandy

December 22, 2021 at 12:56 PM

I'm glad to see you were able to restore your original formatting, I find it so much more attractive and artistic. : )

December 22, 2021 at 6:58 PM

I'm happy that I am able to use the original formatting too. It is my style. Thank you John. Such a wonderful thing to say. :) Hugs, Brandy

December 22, 2021 at 12:05 PM

Brandy, I have read this over and over and marvel at how you are able to get to the heart of the matter and expose so many emotions: longing, joy, peace, uncertainty, vulnerability, security. I guess there's a reason they call it "falling" in love, we give up some of our control of the situation in order to entrust ourselves to another. I just love the line 'your words seem to take shape and then rearrange my breathing' as well as the bold text of 'I Need You'. Truly written from the heart. I celebrate your POTW and your well-honed style that is lovely, sensuous, and with universal appeal. Hugs ~ John

December 22, 2021 at 6:50 PM

John, I am breathless with your thoughts. You humble me, saying that I am able to express each and every emotion through my words. Yes, when you fall in love, your heart has wings and you place your trust in that person fully. Smile. I like that line too. Breathing usually is rearranged, when you're in love. (Breathing patterns change). Placing the words "I Need You" in bold certainly holds the mood on the poem. Thank you my sweet friend, for your kind words and congratulations. :) Hugs, Brandy

December 22, 2021 at 6:33 AM

Congratulatios Brandy, on your POTW honor. "Weak" was a lovely presentation through your gift of poetry. One we preceive as strong, showing their vunerbility, enduces our surrender to love. Beautiful is the melding of two into one. Need met with a feeling of need and love met with love, two becoming one in that Love. Your poetry is inspiring, Brandy. Thank you for sharing from within. Your friend, Bill

December 22, 2021 at 6:34 PM

Dear Bill, your congratulations and compliments caress softly around my heart. Love is a beautiful emotion, and when that sweet ache lingers, there is a strong pull to be close. It's more than a want, it's a need. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Your sweet words. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

December 21, 2021 at 6:24 PM

beautiful verse, Brandy, congratulations on POTW. Happy Holidays

December 21, 2021 at 7:37 PM

Awe. Thank you, Eve. You are so sweet. Happy Holidays to you too. :) Hugs, Brandy

December 20, 2021 at 7:03 PM

Congratulations on your POTW win.

December 21, 2021 at 5:03 PM

Thank you, Debra. Your lovely comment and congratulations are both appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

December 20, 2021 at 2:08 PM

Back with BIG congrats on POTW, Brandy. Glad to see you in this space. Enjoy your fabulous week.

December 21, 2021 at 5:02 PM

Thank you, Vijay. Your support is greatly appreciated. I'm still in awe. May you have a wonderful week. :) Hugs, Brandy

December 20, 2021 at 1:55 PM

WoW! Brandi, You have penned such a well-written and romantic verse. Congratulations on getting the poem of the week. It was well deserved. Have a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year:-) Alexis

December 21, 2021 at 4:59 PM

Dear sweet Alexis, your comment is so beautiful and tender. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Your congratulations. Merry Christmas to you and Happy New Year. :) Hugs, Brandy

Unseeking Seeker

December 20, 2021 at 6:30 AM

Outstanding romantic write! Congrats on POTW, Brandy ~ Merry Christmas and Happy New Year in advance

December 21, 2021 at 4:50 PM

Thank you Unseeking Seeker, for your lovely comment and congratulations. Romance is in the air. So sweet of you. Merry Christmas to you too and Happy New Year. :) Hugs, Brandy

December 20, 2021 at 6:23 AM

There's nothing "weak' about this quietly sensuous poem Brandy....congrats on the POTW

December 21, 2021 at 4:46 PM

Thank you, John. There is a touch of sensuality within. Your kind words and congratulations are greatly appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

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