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While your name is being traced beside mine, as I speak,

your words seem to take shape and then rearrange my breathing.

The second I am lost in the maze that is you, eagerly searching,

the wind finds your whisper of, “I Need You” … and I become weak.

~ A romantic scribble ~

Longing for your touch

Sunday December 19th, 2021- Poem of the Week

(PoetrySoup Format) _______________ While your name is being traced beside mine, as I speak, your words seem to take shape and then rearrange my breathing. The second I am lost in the maze that is you, eagerly searching, the wind finds your whisper of, “I Need You” … and I become weak. _______________ Longing for your touch ~A romantic scribble ~ Sunday December 19th, 2021- Poem of the Week

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Sam Scott

Date: 10/7/2023 10:36:00 PM

It is amazing how the right words from the right person can instantly drop our defences. Words have power. This poem illustrates that with such beauty, Brandy ;))

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/8/2023 4:27:00 PM

You're exactly right, Sam. As the heart holds many emotions within, the thought of being needed seems to be linger after being loved. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/21/2023 12:52:00 AM

"The second I am lost in the maze that is you, eagerly searching" Though this is full of powerfully romantic vibes that is by far my favorite! The conclusion was absolutely amazing and left me weak. My favorite poem so far and that says something because I adore your mind. You see my work, I am obsessed with sexual undertones and romance! Much love Asavvy1

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/21/2023 2:32:00 PM

There is power and depth in this statement. Searching your maze, being lost to the point that you become weak. Romance is always in style and I enjoy writing about that emotion. I'm blushing with you saying you adore my mind. Thank you, Jared. Your thoughts leave me in awe. Yes, I've noticed the sensual tone to your poetry. You are an artist with your words. My best to you. :) Brandy

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/29/2022 9:46:00 AM

Potw from emotive; write not weak.' Great lines here Brandy.)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/29/2022 6:56:00 PM

Thank you, Joe. I appreciate your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Silpika Kalita

Date: 4/26/2022 9:25:00 PM

Oh my, the feelings are so beautifully expressed, the last line I become weak is phenomenal... Silpika

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/27/2022 8:14:00 PM

To be swept away in such a moment, is truly breathtaking. Thank you, Silpika. You and your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Timothy Ray

Date: 4/18/2022 4:22:00 PM

i love romance, i am an intellectual monster refugee and the delight in this is the last line that draws it all in....remember, 9/11 all the phone calls from those planes, none were hate, revenge, or some poet's line....all were simply about Love...looking forward to more

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/19/2022 5:46:00 PM

I can tell you are a romantic. Thank you, Timothy. Your thoughts hold so much truth. Many should reflect on that day more often. Love is a powerful emotion indeed. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Brandy

Arjun Jangid

Date: 3/21/2022 7:22:00 AM

'I need you' these words r very strong to make weak not only in opposite genders but also in every relationship between human. Impressive well done

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/21/2022 8:07:00 PM

Yes, those three words can certainly make you feel "weak." To be needed is a wonderful feeling indeed. Thank you, Arjun. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy

Silent One

Date: 2/21/2022 10:21:00 AM

We all need someone we can count on, someone who will always be there for us in our time of need.. love the subtleness of your poem..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/21/2022 7:40:00 PM

Yes, we do. It's such a wonderful feeling, when someone is that close. Thank you, Silent One. My best to you. :) Brandy

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/19/2022 4:28:00 PM

Hello Brandy ... nice verse filled with romance and desire - thank you Brandy - Lindsay

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/19/2022 8:32:00 PM

Lindsay, your kind words are greatly appreciated. Thank you for the lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/8/2022 9:51:00 PM

As always my dear friend your scribble has an ocean of meaning - i can say, without reservation that you are amongst our greatest of poets on Poetry Soup. A wonderful year ahead of love, joy and health I hope come your way, and Gods richest blessings, Hugs, Jennifer. Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/10/2022 8:39:00 PM

Jennifer, your lovely comment brings a smile to my heart. Such a wonderful thing to say about me and my poetry. I am humbled. Your kind words are greatly appreciated, my sweet friend. May wonderful blessings to you, in 2022. :) Hugs, Brandy

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/31/2021 9:46:00 AM

Very nice Brandy. Sweet :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/31/2021 12:23:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi. You are so kind. Many wonderful blessings to you. Happy New Year. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2021 10:49:00 PM

a beautiful romantic scribble indeed. and here to say congrats on POTW. wow

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/27/2021 7:40:00 PM

Awe.. thank you, Andrea. I appreciate you. Your lovely comment makes my heart smile. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 12/25/2021 8:41:00 AM

Back again with congratulations on POTW,, with this beautiful verse. Merry Christmas sweet friend.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/25/2021 7:29:00 PM

Dear Eve, so sweet of you to come back and read this again. I'm smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/24/2021 7:14:00 AM

Lovely writing... beautiful. Congrats on POTW. God bless you and Merry Christmas. Love, Gina

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/24/2021 7:00:00 PM

Dear Regina, your kind words and congratulations are appreciated. Such a wonderful comment, my sweet friend. Merry Christmas. :) Hugs, Brandy

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/23/2021 7:10:00 PM

Lovely writing, Brandy. Congratulations on your P.O.T.W.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/23/2021 7:32:00 PM

Dear Milton, thank you for your kind words and congratulations. My best to you. Merry Christmas. :) Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 12/23/2021 12:25:00 PM

Lovely romantic piece Brandy, with such delicate wording being so sweet a pen. Blessings always,Gordon

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/23/2021 7:30:00 PM

Dear Gordon, your thoughts are so beautiful and tender. Thank you for the lovely compliment. Many wonderful blessings to you. Merry Christmas. :) Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 12/23/2021 5:23:00 AM

This is so touching, Brandy. I became weak just reading it. So beautifully written. Belated Congratulations on POTW. Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and a Happy & Healthy New Year. Sending love...Charlie

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/23/2021 7:23:00 PM

Dear Charlie, my heart smiles with you saying you became weak, after reading this scribble of mine. Your kind words and congratulations are appreciated. Merry Christmas to you too and Happy New Year. :) Hugs and love, Brandy

John Watt

Date: 12/22/2021 12:56:00 PM

I'm glad to see you were able to restore your original formatting, I find it so much more attractive and artistic. : )

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/22/2021 6:58:00 PM

I'm happy that I am able to use the original formatting too. It is my style. Thank you John. Such a wonderful thing to say. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Watt

Date: 12/22/2021 12:05:00 PM

Brandy, I have read this over and over and marvel at how you are able to get to the heart of the matter and expose so many emotions: longing, joy, peace, uncertainty, vulnerability, security. I guess there's a reason they call it "falling" in love, we give up some of our control of the situation in order to entrust ourselves to another. I just love the line 'your words seem to take shape and then rearrange my breathing' as well as the bold text of 'I Need You'. Truly written from the heart. I celebrate your POTW and your well-honed style that is lovely, sensuous, and with universal appeal. Hugs ~ John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/22/2021 6:50:00 PM

John, I am breathless with your thoughts. You humble me, saying that I am able to express each and every emotion through my words. Yes, when you fall in love, your heart has wings and you place your trust in that person fully. Smile. I like that line too. Breathing usually is rearranged, when you're in love. (Breathing patterns change). Placing the words "I Need You" in bold certainly holds the mood on the poem. Thank you my sweet friend, for your kind words and congratulations. :) Hugs, Brandy

Bill Baker

Date: 12/22/2021 6:33:00 AM

Congratulatios Brandy, on your POTW honor. "Weak" was a lovely presentation through your gift of poetry. One we preceive as strong, showing their vunerbility, enduces our surrender to love. Beautiful is the melding of two into one. Need met with a feeling of need and love met with love, two becoming one in that Love. Your poetry is inspiring, Brandy. Thank you for sharing from within. Your friend, Bill

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/22/2021 6:34:00 PM

Dear Bill, your congratulations and compliments caress softly around my heart. Love is a beautiful emotion, and when that sweet ache lingers, there is a strong pull to be close. It's more than a want, it's a need. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Your sweet words. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 12/21/2021 6:24:00 PM

beautiful verse, Brandy, congratulations on POTW. Happy Holidays

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/21/2021 7:37:00 PM

Awe. Thank you, Eve. You are so sweet. Happy Holidays to you too. :) Hugs, Brandy

Debra L Brown

Date: 12/20/2021 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTW win.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/21/2021 5:03:00 PM

Thank you, Debra. Your lovely comment and congratulations are both appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/20/2021 2:08:00 PM

Back with BIG congrats on POTW, Brandy. Glad to see you in this space. Enjoy your fabulous week.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/21/2021 5:02:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay. Your support is greatly appreciated. I'm still in awe. May you have a wonderful week. :) Hugs, Brandy

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/20/2021 1:55:00 PM

WoW! Brandi, You have penned such a well-written and romantic verse. Congratulations on getting the poem of the week. It was well deserved. Have a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year:-) Alexis

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/21/2021 4:59:00 PM

Dear sweet Alexis, your comment is so beautiful and tender. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Your congratulations. Merry Christmas to you and Happy New Year. :) Hugs, Brandy

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/20/2021 6:30:00 AM

Outstanding romantic write! Congrats on POTW, Brandy ~ Merry Christmas and Happy New Year in advance

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/21/2021 4:50:00 PM

Thank you Unseeking Seeker, for your lovely comment and congratulations. Romance is in the air. So sweet of you. Merry Christmas to you too and Happy New Year. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Lawless

Date: 12/20/2021 6:23:00 AM

There's nothing "weak' about this quietly sensuous poem Brandy....congrats on the POTW

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/21/2021 4:46:00 PM

Thank you, John. There is a touch of sensuality within. Your kind words and congratulations are greatly appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy