Eve Roper Poet Pantoum

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We Will Drink Some Nectar Sweet

We’ll Drink Some Nectar Sweet

hummingbirds, bumblebees dart amongst the blooms	
wings almost invisible move  beneath	
butterflies flutter sweet nectar consume 
laden ambrosia drips down petal  leaves

		
wings almost invisible move  beneath 
morning sun bathed wet with tinseling  dew		
laden ambrosia drips down petal  leaves 
as zephyrs breeze flourish new born buds full


morning sun bathed wet with tinseling  dew
new depth of glamour love spills  where they breathe	
as zephyrs breeze flourish new born buds full 
fuzzy bumblebees buzz life from bloom to weave	
	 
	
new depth of glamour love spills  where they breathe		
butterflies flutter sweet nectar consume 
fuzzy bumblebees buzz life from bloom to weave
 hummingbirds, bumblebees dart amongst the blooms

7/3/2016

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Anne-Lise Andresen July 8, 2016 at 11:43 AM - This is really beautiful Eve, enjoy reading - Small things in life that make you happy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Seosamh De Burca July 6, 2016 at 9:53 AM You make this style of poetry seem effortless, great work. So many wonderful lines in your poem .."fuzzy bumblebees buzz life from bloom to weave"...love that line. Great poem.

Nette Onclaud July 4, 2016 at 1:07 PM how vivid can this picture be, eve... a lovely work of floral art!..huggs

Gary Bateman July 4, 2016 at 7:46 AM Hello Eve, An exquisitely rendered Pantoum. Great Work on this. Cheers and Best, Gary

Tom Quigley July 4, 2016 at 7:00 AM Beautiful!

Probir Gupta July 4, 2016 at 6:09 AM A feast for the eyes and ears, a gift for the touch and smell ...

Joanna Daniel July 4, 2016 at 3:07 AM Lovely choice of words:)

Ravi Sathasivam July 4, 2016 at 1:01 AM Excellent. Beautifully said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

CayCay Godwin July 3, 2016 at 9:49 PM Lovely and enthralling, such a joy to read ... CayCay

Daniel Turner July 3, 2016 at 7:31 PM Mrs Eve, the form itself is beautiful but with your words it is truly a piece of art. Thank you for sharing.