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We Were Country Folks

From Grades one to eight,
I attended a private Catholic school,
my fertile father fathered thirteen children,
and begrudgingly, the school board coveted our souls
for the tax revenue alone.
So, they sent a bus to pick us up,
for we were country folks
and it was nine miles to town.
I remember when I was ten
and my teacher sent me to the principal's office,
to explain my egregious behavior.
My teacher claimed I was obtuse
and mischievous,
referencing the matter of my gross graffiti.
It seems she saw the smutty drawings
I drew of her on the men's rooms stalls
and swore I was due for a rude awakening.
The principal, a nun, wasn't having any of it
screaming I must be evil,
or perhaps on drugs.
That was her opinion of every student
attending her strict school,
she had little regard for our souls.
If it were up to her
she'd have a priest consecrate the school,
so that mine and all other demon souls,
would be banished from her holy place forever.
And though I survived the indignity of her strap
that day; and the many more that followed,
the scars of those memories
cost me my faith.


(Free Verse)


08,20,2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hamilton Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 10:44 AM
Thanks Emile for your entry in my contest, congrats on placing in this hard to judge contest. Sad if this story is true, as I sense that it might be!
Pinet Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 4:58 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Lane Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 5:06 AM
Hi Emile. I hope this was a work of fiction, but fear it's not. I think it's very well written and more deserving. I pray you're well.
Pinet Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:34 AM
Thanks Lin, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile
Chiri Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 1:05 AM
Wonderful poem and congrats on your placement!;)
Pinet Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:33 AM
Thanks Brenda, I appreciate it my friend, Emile
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 2:39 PM
How sad that some nuns were so cruel. I have heard others tell tales of their cruelty too. You fit these required words into your poem seamlessly Emile. Well done! : ) xxoo
Pinet Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 3:54 PM
Thanks Connie, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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