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We Together

We together can change the way our moral tendencies do stray. Yet we build walls round our estate and over parapets berate the way that others go to pray. Nation on nation joins the fray some indignation to repay. What harmony we could create; we together. Sweet dreams the children have who play oblivious that they one day will fight a war of unjust hate their fathers wish to propagate. It is a fate we could allay we together.

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/15/2025 7:14:00 PM

You commented on my poem To Fly yesterday and I don't recall crossing paths before. I've been a souper since 2015 but disappered 4-22 until 2-25 so maybe we have/maybe we haven't, either way it feels like the 1st time I've read you and I'm impressed. Great job with the form and content emotion. I'm off to read more of you ... CayCay

Terry Miller
Date: 5/16/2025 1:46:00 AM

I wrote my first poem in April 2021 on here, for one of Edward's competitions, was place 6th, which just was a wonderful start and encouraged me to continue. Everyone on Soup is so encouraging, thank you again for reading my stuff

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/15/2025 11:29:00 AM

So sad it is to see the possibilities in children with their innocence.

Terry Miller
Date: 5/16/2025 1:47:00 AM

It is indeed, thank you Kim

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/15/2025 11:05:00 AM

What a powerful write you have here. Today, people are into the "I and Me" word. We need to get back to the "We Together" word. Have a blessed day writing away.........

Terry Miller
Date: 5/16/2025 1:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Paula