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Woman Speaking: Oh thank you God, for this amazing life, for the forests and for the green trees; and the azure blue sky and for everything, in nature so infinite and beautiful. Man Speaking: Thank you God, for the deep blue ocean, for the all the birds with wings that fly; and each majestic creature big and small, thanks for love that gives life meaning. Woman Speaking: Oh thanks for giving us divine senses, like tasting, touching, hearing and seeing; and for breathing and for life's joys, even the sorrows teach us, God. Man Speaking: God, everyday I am in this earthly existence, my ears are awake to your teachings; I will praise your name to all who will listen, and when my days are done, take me home. Woman Speaking: Each day, my eyes will be open and seeing, to all the sunrises and sunsets and skies; yes, to all the beauty in this created world, until, until my eyes drop for the last time. Man Speaking: Each day we will sing your praise together, we will live our life's with your guidance; and accept that you cannot stop the wars, that man has created, even world suffering. _________________________ December 8, 2017 Poetry/Verse/"We, Thank You God" Copyright Protected, ID 17-9695-83-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Just Us Together Praising God, Again sponsor, James Edward Lee Sr. Third Place

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Date: 1/5/2018 3:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win, BW.
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Date: 1/5/2018 1:43:00 PM
how amazing sweet Broken Wings! Congrats :) -luloo
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Date: 1/2/2018 2:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 1/1/2018 9:44:00 PM
Congratulations this beautiful inspiring write, Broken Wings. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/1/2018 9:07:00 PM
This is wonderful, Constance ... I so love your writing style and sincerity. Congrats on your win, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 1/1/2018 8:47:00 PM
What a wonderful poem--praising the Creator for the Creation. This ismy newest favorite. Congrats, Constance. Janice
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Date: 12/8/2017 4:11:00 PM
Wonderful prayers BW, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 12/8/2017 3:34:00 PM
This is beautiful! Each line is a boom! Each stanza is a joy to behold! Best wishes in the contest.
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