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We Survive

Life is a knife of knight
That stab a human heart 
without being humane
With a pain
That move slowly as a coal train

Humans burden burn to become 
Happiness beaten by the drum
Sorrows that come
Before saint and sinners
of the won battles of life beginners

That overcome the hollow hole life
With the help of oxygen to breath
That travel like wi-fi of death
From the soil to the fertilized seed
That blossom to be a rainbow flower

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/25/2025 6:03:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
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Date: 6/10/2017 8:43:00 PM
Wow! This was set up very nicely and I loved the rhyming. A great peek into the lives of a couple determined to be unhindered by circumstance.
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